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Went out for a walk today as ive been so busy at the hospital this week with a MRI scan hopefully ill get my results soon

Camera:Fujifilm s1500
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:bird relaxing
Username:kforeman kforeman
Uploaded:18 Jan 2011 - 7:48 PM
Tags:Close-up / macro
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Tooth
Tooth  95772 forum posts Ireland227 Constructive Critique Points
19 Jan 2011 - 12:54 AM

You've probably done well to capture this at all as it's probably at the limit of what your lens can handle. The main problem with it is that it's not sharp - the sharpest point of focus needs to be the eyes of the bird. It could also do with a slight boost in contrast as it's a little bit flat.

Well done for getting the shot, these are just my thoughs..

Stephen

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kforeman
kforeman  5 England
19 Jan 2011 - 10:48 PM

as i have a fujifilm s1500 i cant do alot my lenses are build in to the camera. i really cant do what i want with this camera. i am looking for a job at the moment to give me some cash for a new camera and equipment i would like.

I am letting some one do another photo shoot of me on the 29th at Bawsey Ruins with swords and stuff cant wait

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paulbroad
paulbroad  782 forum posts United Kingdom875 Constructive Critique Points
21 Jan 2011 - 9:09 AM

Yes, you are pushing the camera to it's limits. The general image is good, but the lack of definition spoils it. It may not all be the camera, you know. I suspect this is at the tele end of your zoom and i suspect a bit of camera movement. Some firm support would help, but rarely available.

Paul

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