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this is a picture of a friend of mine . He hasn't seen this picture yet , So he'll be surprised when he sees it on this site

Camera:Minolta
Lens:Standard
Recording media:kodak 100
Title:frederic
Username:kili kili
Uploaded:11 Jan 2005 - 11:20 PM
Tags:Portraits / people
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KatieR
KatieR  106197 forum posts6 Constructive Critique Points
12 Jan 2005 - 1:28 AM

I like it, but I would suggest a couple of things to improve it. One that you could do quite easily would be to crop off the top - when I do it on my screen, it gives more emphasis to his face, and the pale sky is reduced. The other is not really possible, but his eyes need to be a little lighter, perhaps. I hope that is of interest.
Katie

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jcthomson
jcthomson  9
12 Jan 2005 - 4:15 AM

I like this as it stands. I think it would have had even more impact with the camera lower down, concentrating on the head and shoulders, with quite a shallow dof, making the background less focused and more ethereal.
James

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kili
kili  9
11 Feb 2005 - 11:04 AM

Thanks for the comment . I should of done it like James expailend , that would have had more 'touch' . good 2 know .

karl

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nancyo
nancyo  978 forum posts
17 Feb 2005 - 6:48 PM

very nice image, hope he liked it.
click nancy

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