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At the end of July I attended a memorial event at the National Arboretum Alrewas, Staffordshire. This set of 3 shows the different aspects of the place, which is well worth a visit

Camera:Nikon D2Xs Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:Nikon 17-55mm f2.8
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Remember them
Username:kilo363 kilo363
Uploaded:2 Sep 2010 - 12:18 AM
Tags:National arboretum alrewas, Photo journalism
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NeilWigan
NeilWigan  4 England15 Constructive Critique Points
2 Sep 2010 - 12:35 AM

the wife really likes the set,for me 3 is most poignant.good set. must visit soon .Neil and family. The only thing i would alter is some of the frameing/cropping , but that is a personal choice.

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kilo363
kilo363  5 Scotland
2 Sep 2010 - 12:50 AM

I've uploaded a furthe shot converted to mono showing a wider view of version #1 at 90 degrees. this memorial was built to contain the names of all Service Personel who have died since the end of World War 2

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cats_123
cats_123 e2 Member 104250 forum postscats_123 vcard Northern Ireland25 Constructive Critique Points
2 Sep 2010 - 7:48 AM

nice set...think V1 deserves a squarer crop...a lovely tribute..haven't had chance to get up there yet

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SUE118
SUE118 e2 Member 6SUE118 vcard United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
2 Sep 2010 - 7:58 AM

And they should be remembered. A good powerful set of images, well done.

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davey_griffo
2 Sep 2010 - 9:49 AM

Some very well shot & poignant images.

Without exception they all have a slight lean to the left which needs correcting. Don't worry too much, your modders didn't notice either. Smile

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CathR
CathR  7139 forum posts United Kingdom563 Constructive Critique Points
2 Sep 2010 - 10:59 AM

A good set Al, quite different from your bike series.

For me V1 works well as a pic with the contrast between the red of the poppies and the grey of the wreath and figures. I like the composition too with the out of focus figure in the background.

It does need a bit of attention though. Just a touch more zooming out would have enabled you to get the whole of the wreath in the pic and the person on the right hand side at the back. As Davey_griffo points out the pic is slightly leaning to the left.

V2 is quite intriguing in that I am unsure whether the open door is built like that - I guess it must be. Perhaps the significance of the soldier pointing towards the opening is more appparent when you see the whole of the memorial (I've not been yet).

V3 is very striking. I think I would have gone for a portrait format to get the whole of the statue in.

V4 gives you a better idea of the layout but I would have cropped a bit off the foreground.

Lots of potential here, Al

Best wishes

Catherine

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Philo
Philo e2 Member 487 forum postsPhilo vcard England83 Constructive Critique Points
2 Sep 2010 - 3:14 PM

Hi Al, I did a couple of mods this morning but then didn't get a chance to comment. I agree that this is a good set of images that is quite thought provoking. V3 is my personal favourite but I also find V2 intriguing. V4 has great potential but I feel it needs something; just can't put my finger on it! V1 definitely needs the straightening and could have done with the whole wreath being included but the concept works well.
Can't wait for your next offering.
Phil

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paulbroad
paulbroad  789 forum posts United Kingdom880 Constructive Critique Points
2 Sep 2010 - 4:22 PM

A moving set of images. We have been right ********* to our fighting men in the past, and these images tell a story. OK, a few things could be changed - I particularly like the crop for V3, which is a particularly good image - but I really like what you have recorded.

My grandfather fought on the first Somme in 1916 and was taken prisoner. He thus had nearly 2 years as a prisoner with a wife and three young kids at home. When he was repatriated, our wonderful Government of the time sent him to Ireland for two years to pay the country back for the 2 years he was a prisoner instead of fighting, or being dead!

He told my father he was more frightened in Ireland than on the Western Front!

I'm really with you, Frank. Modern kids are not taught what they should be at all. Too many do gooders and not enough common sense.


Paul

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kilo363
kilo363  5 Scotland
2 Sep 2010 - 6:50 PM

Thank you all. A few points reference your comments. Dead right, the shots are all leaning the same way. No excuse. I must have one heel lower than the other Smile

The crop on v1, that is it as I shot it and it's my fault that I clipped the bronze wreath. I have another version of that shot with the focus on the bronze wreath that is slightly wider, but I prefer the focus being on the poppies. Another lesson learned.

#2 I like, when I saw it I thought it was the soldier in shadow looking into the light through the door. I like the mod of this, I will have another look at thr RAW as i'd like to consider that one for competition use.

#3 I have various versions of. I was trying to get the posts lined up in a regimented fashion. I used some fill flash in this one.

#4 was a quick and dirty mono conversion just to give some perspective to the other shots. I would be happier with it if I spent more time with it.

My uncle was a Sgt Pilot in the RFC in WW1 and his brother, my dad, landed in Normandy in 1944 and was in action throughout NW Europe. from the battalion he joined in 1939, 3 survived until 1945. I quite agree these 'REAL' heroes need remembered .

I'll post some other shots from there after midnight. Then I'll be away for the weekend drinking Guinness at a castle in Fife Smile

Thank you all again

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