No 2 for me,the first is a bit of a snapshot.
The second is a lot more creative and works a lot better for it.
ISO 800 ? Although todays digitals don`t show much noise its always best to keep the ISO as low as possible unless trying to be creative.
f5.6 @ 1/320th sec ???
How about Iso 200 f11 @1/125th ???
Your not trying to throw out the background so f11 being mid ground and 1/125th would be enough to freeze the shot
Saying that you`ve exposed well theres no noise and no movment, just passing on what i `ve bee taught.
Nice portpholio a collection of nice uncomplicated well taken images.
Hope this helps