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17/04/2013 - 7:52 AM
"I want to break free..."
For me a image in too halves.It`s said don`t have even numbers in an image and to me this is a good example, my eye dosn`t know where to go .
This would make two really well taken images or with the addition of a 3rd object,maybe a sprig of herb ? would really make it sing.
Saying that its well taken,nice control of light,good refection and well worthy of a vote.
16/04/2013 - 9:05 AM
Dancers
16/04/2013 - 9:03 AM
Troutbeck Fells
15/04/2013 - 7:40 AM
AFRICAN STORM
14/04/2013 - 10:18 AM
Essex Buoy
14/04/2013 - 10:06 AM
brittle
Its good to get depth of field right and this shows your mastering it.The main subject being the cow parsley with the defused house across the lake.
I think if you had a lower view point and got ome more foreground in shot it would strengthen your shot.
I might even crop down from the top to lose the house as the 2 windows draw your eye to them and thats not the purpose of the image.
If you wanted the house in ty the differant approach of opening up your lens to F4 or lower , having the grass /parsley blurred and the house sharp
Hope this helps
Kim
03/04/2013 - 9:11 PM
The Fountain
Hi AnnellyYou need a point of intrest in an image,maybe a single jet or spout coming out of the water.
The water is nicely captured,not to milky so you`ve got imho that part right.
Try bringing your f stop down ,you have it at f29 (really small hole with big depth of field)
If you brought it down to about f4 and found a point to focus on you would get a much more limited depth of field.
Keep your ISO as low as you can and match your shutter speed using the internal light meter.
Hope this helps
Kim
03/04/2013 - 8:21 PM
The Old Pump House
03/04/2013 - 8:12 PM
South Gare Pier thing
13/06/2012 - 8:59 PM
Salthouse Sunset
10/06/2012 - 10:10 PM
Church on the Marsh
07/06/2012 - 10:41 AM
Meadow pipit
08/04/2012 - 6:50 PM
Leyah
08/04/2012 - 6:31 PM
Chester Cathedral
05/04/2012 - 10:06 AM
[wales severn bridge]
Sorry to me its over cooked. The brown tones look like a its well under exposed properly with use of NG filters.Try exposing for a mid point in the view finder using a single area focus point ( A point between the brightest and darkest areas of the shot )
Then re adjust the composition without changing your settings ......Hope this helps
Kim
03/04/2012 - 12:29 PM
Just Yellow
03/04/2012 - 10:30 AM
Glenarm Bay
Horizon needs adjusting a little.A little foreground intrest maybe you could get flat on floor and use texture of pebbles i=f there wasn`t any stones ,driftwood `etc.
Lose a 3rd from top so you just get the top of the hill in shot on left.
Positives
Nice curves into shot ,leads eye from front along water front.
Good exposure,you`ve held the colours in the clouds well.
Regards
Kim
16/08/2011 - 9:23 AM
Cool poser
No 2 for me,the first is a bit of a snapshot.The second is a lot more creative and works a lot better for it.
ISO 800 ? Although todays digitals don`t show much noise its always best to keep the ISO as low as possible unless trying to be creative.
f5.6 @ 1/320th sec ???
How about Iso 200 f11 @1/125th ???
Your not trying to throw out the background so f11 being mid ground and 1/125th would be enough to freeze the shot
Saying that you`ve exposed well theres no noise and no movment, just passing on what i `ve bee taught.
Nice portpholio a collection of nice uncomplicated well taken images.
Hope this helps
Kim
20/03/2011 - 10:38 PM
The First Day Of Snow :)
18/11/2010 - 3:02 PM
Tree Trunk
Nice texture and diagonalsNot sure on your choise of lens ? Try using something a bit less "wide" around 70-100mm . Find an actual point to focus on and use spot metering. Try differant stops to create differant versions 2.8 to start ,8 and a 16 ((Depending on lens ) Use the same point of focus on all and use a tripod.Use manual setting adusting exposure to math apeture.
Hope this helps
Regards
Kim






















