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Trying a 20 x 8 storyboard for the first time. Thought i would share!

My niece, all taken with 50mm lens on a cold day at the beach!

Title:Storyboard
Username:Kim19 Kim19
Uploaded:5 Feb 2006 - 8:16 AM
Tags:Portraits / people
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victorian
victorian  8
5 Feb 2006 - 10:24 AM

I love the colours and atmosphere but I think the middle one is letting the triptych down. It's not as bold or as clearly defined as the other two. This deserves more attention though

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JuliaB
JuliaB  9109 forum posts United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
5 Feb 2006 - 11:07 AM

I agree with the above. The end two shots are great, the middle looks a bit lost; I imagine in big size it looks better though. Very cute. Julia

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RichardB
RichardB  9328 forum posts United Kingdom
5 Feb 2006 - 11:18 AM

Nice Storyboard for a winters day at the beach - I wouldn't change any of the shots the middle works fine for me Smile

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nikonneil
nikonneil  10 United Kingdom
21 Feb 2006 - 10:19 PM

Cracking images very well presented
you have some great shots in your P/Folio keep up the great work
Neil

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Jules33
Jules33  7 Scotland
26 Mar 2007 - 1:25 PM

I love this, it's gorgeous and thourghly under clicked.

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katemotty
katemotty  7
3 Apr 2007 - 10:00 PM

A great attempt at your first storyboard, really love the colours running through the triptych and the middle image perfectly completes the overall capture of the girl.

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