Fender Bender

ade_mcfade

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17 Oct 2008 - 4:14 PM

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this is ace - not a great deal to crit about it.

the power is in the fact that the whole screen is filled with lines, lines of all shapes and orientations.

there's 2 schools of thought here - one says that the pattern being broken by the dark area is good, patterns with a small break are a good thing. they add that little extra interest. like a knott does in a wooden plank for instance

the other one is that the pattern is the picture and maybe in this instance, because of the position of the dark area being so close to the frame edge, I'd say that including the dark area doesn't work quite as well as it would havfe done were it else where, say on a 1/3 intersection line

so maybe a crop above the wheel arch would work?

cracking image though

Constructive Critique!