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Reflections of a corrugated steel building in a highly polished car

Camera:fuji s6500fd
Lens:50mm equiv
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Fender Bender
Username:Kirkby Kirkby
Uploaded:17 Oct 2008 - 2:50 PM
Tags:Car reflections corrugated, Flash / lighting, Specialist / abstract, Transport
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fatherpie
fatherpie  6 England12 Constructive Critique Points
17 Oct 2008 - 2:52 PM

What a fantastic idea - well spotted
Dave

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gerrymac
gerrymac  7 United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
17 Oct 2008 - 2:56 PM

Lovely abstract...well spotted...make a great poster
Gerry

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athos55
athos55  8 United Kingdom
17 Oct 2008 - 2:57 PM

Very imaginative. Nice shot.

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IFIMAGE
IFIMAGE  6143 forum posts Wales
17 Oct 2008 - 3:17 PM

Love it!
Ian..

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nefaman
nefaman  8 United Kingdom
17 Oct 2008 - 3:20 PM

this works so well
and great framing adds to the effect

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ade_mcfade e2 Member 1014794 forum postsade_mcfade vcard England216 Constructive Critique Points
17 Oct 2008 - 4:14 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

this is ace - not a great deal to crit about it.

the power is in the fact that the whole screen is filled with lines, lines of all shapes and orientations.

there's 2 schools of thought here - one says that the pattern being broken by the dark area is good, patterns with a small break are a good thing. they add that little extra interest. like a knott does in a wooden plank for instance

the other one is that the pattern is the picture and maybe in this instance, because of the position of the dark area being so close to the frame edge, I'd say that including the dark area doesn't work quite as well as it would havfe done were it else where, say on a 1/3 intersection line

so maybe a crop above the wheel arch would work?

cracking image though

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lonely_oryx
lonely_oryx e2 Member 661 forum postslonely_oryx vcard England54 Constructive Critique Points
17 Oct 2008 - 5:59 PM

Excellently created

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DOGSBODY  51432 forum posts England30 Constructive Critique Points
17 Oct 2008 - 7:49 PM

This is a superb pic. allthose curves are super. Andy

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10829 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2833 Constructive Critique Points
17 Oct 2008 - 10:34 PM

A well spotted picture opportunity here, - and with some tighter cropping makes a terrific abstract, either in colour or B&W, 2 mods loaded for review.


Regards


W

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JeremyTrickett
3 Nov 2008 - 10:14 PM

Gets my vote, well spotted and taken, all the best Jerry.

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