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my daughter, checking her myspace
she wouldn't pose so grabbed a couple of shots of her in front of the computer lol
not sure of the crop but the shadows from monitor were too dramatic/looked too weird, for the full face, so it ended up like this, i can't seem to get a decent 'eye' shot
anyway, bloomin internet went down for the rest of the night after i took this! so i'll catch up on here later
have a good day
ta for looking
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I Like it, think the composition works really well.
It's quite effeective Jo, well lit and the composition works OK for me. I don't like the black border to the left of the face though, it just does'nt look quite right to me. Maybe it should be a bit thinner?
I love the lighting in this, and the faraway look on her face. If anything, the black border on the left could be thicker, as if she were half hidden behind a door or something.
good light and crop..not so sure about the black border to the left .....
I really like this, especially the crop. To be honest, I hadn't noticed the black to the left of her face, but now it's been pointed out, I have to agree that it's a bit of a dsitraction.
I quite lihe this. The face is beautifully lit, the crop is good. Wasn't nor sure about the border at first, but it I kind of grew on me.
Her eye looks very sharp to me Jo, and the light you have got on the visible part of her face is very good and has a diffused quality to it
i like the crop personally....and doesn't she look like you!
cheers for FB, actually thought of making the black on left bigger! lol sort of half n half with her
GREAT SHOT, LOVE THE COMPOSITION.
All your portraits have a creative edge and this is no exception. Impressive work.
Yes,would be good to see a version with a large black area to the left of the picture.
Like the reflection of the computor screen in the eye.Would be interesting if you could somehow see in the reflection what the person was looking at!?
eh john ?!
anyways put the other crop in the mods, bit late but never mind
ta for FB all
a quality image handled in your own specialway. :0)
A nice fresh image of total absorbtion.
I think you chose the right crop.
I like the intensity of this, but not wild about the black border on the left. I think it would be better with the face right on the edge. The title is perfect for this, with all the negative space on the right of the profile. Dramatic image.
Yep this is great different angle clear sharp all elements work so well nice one,John
love the crop jo and perfect title.....jojo
The crop you chose works for me and for the title. Lovely light on her face, and love the reflection in her eye. My goodness but she looks so much like you I did a double take!
I think that the crop works well...very dramatic edge to it, which suits the modern look and the computer reflection in her eye.
Great idea in the first place and I just love the light and colours in this, Jo. And that crop provides a lot of impact!
thanks everyone, hopefully Kath will let me leave this up! ( i got a right ticking off as apparently she doesn't like it :-( )
edit: oh lol good grief! it has to stay now
Original crop Jo. Congrats on the HC
congrats on the HC jo!
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