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my daughter, checking her myspace

she wouldn't pose so grabbed a couple of shots of her in front of the computer lol

not sure of the crop but the shadows from monitor were too dramatic/looked too weird, for the full face, so it ended up like this, i can't seem to get a decent 'eye' shot

anyway, bloomin internet went down for the rest of the night after i took this! so i'll catch up on here later

have a good day
ta for looking

jo

Title:myspace
Username:kitsch kitsch
Uploaded:1 Mar 2007 - 7:24 AM
Tags:Digitally manipulated, Portraits / people
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daza123
daza123  9
1 Mar 2007 - 7:34 AM

I Like it, think the composition works really well.
Nice image
darryl.

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DaveU
DaveU  81344 forum posts England121 Constructive Critique Points
1 Mar 2007 - 8:07 AM

It's quite effeective Jo, well lit and the composition works OK for me. I don't like the black border to the left of the face though, it just does'nt look quite right to me. Maybe it should be a bit thinner?

Dave.

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ChrisOs
ChrisOs  9 United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
1 Mar 2007 - 8:43 AM

I love the lighting in this, and the faraway look on her face. If anything, the black border on the left could be thicker, as if she were half hidden behind a door or something.
Chris

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bliba
bliba  9 Austria2 Constructive Critique Points
1 Mar 2007 - 10:10 AM

good light and crop..not so sure about the black border to the left .....

ollie

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Geraint
Geraint  8715 forum posts Wales34 Constructive Critique Points
1 Mar 2007 - 10:50 AM

I really like this, especially the crop. To be honest, I hadn't noticed the black to the left of her face, but now it's been pointed out, I have to agree that it's a bit of a dsitraction.

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SamM
SamM  8 Germany
1 Mar 2007 - 11:47 AM

I quite lihe this. The face is beautifully lit, the crop is good. Wasn't nor sure about the border at first, but it I kind of grew on me.
Sandra

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backbeat
backbeat e2 Member 8134 forum postsbackbeat vcard United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
1 Mar 2007 - 12:36 PM

Her eye looks very sharp to me Jo, and the light you have got on the visible part of her face is very good and has a diffused quality to it

i like the crop personally....and doesn't she look like you!

phil

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kitsch
kitsch  8439 forum posts United Kingdom4 Constructive Critique Points
1 Mar 2007 - 12:39 PM

cheers for FB, actually thought of making the black on left bigger! lol sort of half n half with her Smile

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electricsoup
1 Mar 2007 - 1:31 PM

GREAT SHOT, LOVE THE COMPOSITION.

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oppo
oppo  8 Scotland2 Constructive Critique Points
1 Mar 2007 - 3:56 PM

All your portraits have a creative edge and this is no exception. Impressive work.

Phil

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JohnH37
JohnH37  8 United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
1 Mar 2007 - 5:08 PM

Yes,would be good to see a version with a large black area to the left of the picture.
Like the reflection of the computor screen in the eye.Would be interesting if you could somehow see in the reflection what the person was looking at!?
-John.

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kitsch
kitsch  8439 forum posts United Kingdom4 Constructive Critique Points
1 Mar 2007 - 5:15 PM

eh john ?! Smile

anyways put the other crop in the mods, bit late but never mind

ta for FB all

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User_Removed
1 Mar 2007 - 5:46 PM

a quality image handled in your own specialway. :0)

Di

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BlueRoom
BlueRoom e2 Member 873 forum postsBlueRoom vcard United Kingdom20 Constructive Critique Points
1 Mar 2007 - 5:53 PM

A nice fresh image of total absorbtion.
I think you chose the right crop.

Eric.

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Joline
Joline e2 Member 8Joline vcard United States52 Constructive Critique Points
1 Mar 2007 - 6:24 PM

I like the intensity of this, but not wild about the black border on the left. I think it would be better with the face right on the edge. The title is perfect for this, with all the negative space on the right of the profile. Dramatic image.

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neonknight
neonknight  10 United Kingdom
1 Mar 2007 - 8:52 PM

Yep this is great different angle clear sharp all elements work so well nice one,John

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shortski
shortski  8 England1 Constructive Critique Points
1 Mar 2007 - 9:31 PM

love the crop jo and perfect title.....jojo

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Possum
Possum  8148 forum posts England
1 Mar 2007 - 10:35 PM

The crop you chose works for me and for the title. Lovely light on her face, and love the reflection in her eye. My goodness but she looks so much like you I did a double take!
Allie

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DYankee
DYankee  8 United States
1 Mar 2007 - 11:14 PM

I think that the crop works well...very dramatic edge to it, which suits the modern look and the computer reflection in her eye.
Dawn Smile

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ChiliMan
ChiliMan e2 Member 8135 forum postsChiliMan vcard Singapore17 Constructive Critique Points
2 Mar 2007 - 5:35 PM

Fabulous.

Great idea in the first place and I just love the light and colours in this, Jo. And that crop provides a lot of impact!

Andrew Smile

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kitsch
kitsch  8439 forum posts United Kingdom4 Constructive Critique Points
2 Mar 2007 - 5:47 PM

thanks everyone, hopefully Kath will let me leave this up! ( i got a right ticking off as apparently she doesn't like it :-( )

edit: oh lol good grief! it has to stay now

thanks Pete Smile

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TommyStr
TommyStr  8 Norway3 Constructive Critique Points
4 Mar 2007 - 6:11 AM

Original crop Jo. Congrats on the HC
Tommy

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backbeat
backbeat e2 Member 8134 forum postsbackbeat vcard United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
4 Mar 2007 - 10:07 PM

congrats on the HC jo!

phil

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kitsch
kitsch  8439 forum posts United Kingdom4 Constructive Critique Points
4 Mar 2007 - 10:09 PM

:-0)))

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kitsch
kitsch  8439 forum posts United Kingdom4 Constructive Critique Points
4 Mar 2007 - 10:09 PM

ooops!

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