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i uploaded a version of this yesterday & then deleted it
reworked from scratch & i don't know now if it's any better lol
am sick of looking at it anyway! so...

thanks for the comments & crit etc on the original
Jo

Camera:canon eos 20d
Lens:18-55
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:*
Username:kitsch kitsch
Uploaded:14 Sep 2010 - 6:32 PM
Tags:Black & white, Flash / lighting, Portraits / people
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W1ldside
W1ldside  4 United Kingdom29 Constructive Critique Points
14 Sep 2010 - 6:38 PM

Great run of a series ~ she must be elated and should make for a lovely PF for her for the future
Rick

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Scaramanga
Scaramanga e2 Member 637 forum postsScaramanga vcard United Kingdom5 Constructive Critique Points
14 Sep 2010 - 6:40 PM

Beautiful light, wonderful expression really like her placement in the frame. Quality viewed large.

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User_Removed
14 Sep 2010 - 6:45 PM

I clicked it yesterday, and I'll click it again today, 'cos I still think it's a fantastic piece of work.

Al.

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kitsch
kitsch  8438 forum posts United Kingdom4 Constructive Critique Points
14 Sep 2010 - 6:47 PM

thanks folks,
yeah, she looks a bit less 'dirty urchin' in large version lol
she has no desire to be a model by the way! just does it to help me Smile

Last Modified By kitsch at 14 Sep 2010 - 6:48 PM

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Richsr
Richsr e2 Member 790 forum postsRichsr vcard England209 Constructive Critique Points
14 Sep 2010 - 7:10 PM

Love the expression and the lovely eyes too Jo, good work from all in this.
Regards Richard

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rontear
rontear e2 Member 11rontear vcard England4 Constructive Critique Points
14 Sep 2010 - 7:17 PM

Soulful, Jo. Ron.

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LV426
LV426  5 United Kingdom4 Constructive Critique Points
14 Sep 2010 - 7:27 PM

Almost mystical & magical.
Love it.
Tarek

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Paintman
Paintman e2 Member 7851 forum postsPaintman vcard United Kingdom173 Constructive Critique Points
14 Sep 2010 - 7:46 PM

I like the shot and the processing. Excellent stuff.

Alan.

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LesF
LesF e2 Member 7176 forum postsLesF vcard 8 Constructive Critique Points
14 Sep 2010 - 7:54 PM

Wonderful expression and mono Jo

LesF

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polly470
polly470 e2 Member 425 forum postspolly470 vcard United Kingdom8 Constructive Critique Points
14 Sep 2010 - 7:57 PM

'Duffer!!' - not a hope....fragile, vunerable, elfin...bloody marvelous!!!
Pailine

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stix
stix e2 Member 9924 forum postsstix vcard United Kingdom87 Constructive Critique Points
14 Sep 2010 - 8:26 PM

Love it.
Martin

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kitsch
kitsch  8438 forum posts United Kingdom4 Constructive Critique Points
14 Sep 2010 - 8:53 PM

Smile
thanks folks!

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arhb
arhb e2 Member 72222 forum postsarhb vcard United Kingdom68 Constructive Critique Points
14 Sep 2010 - 9:13 PM

I voted yesterday Jo, and I'm voting again, great work.

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JamesGarfield
14 Sep 2010 - 9:37 PM

Great work, well done!

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akhtarkhan
akhtarkhan  12 United Kingdom4 Constructive Critique Points
14 Sep 2010 - 10:55 PM

Great clasic B & W portrait pose. Sharp focusing, good lighting and eye contact.
Akhtar

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johnnyboy114
15 Sep 2010 - 7:34 AM

Really quite lovely......she might not want to model, but she could.....ever thought of being a photographer? You seem quite good at it........ Wink

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dmhuynh72
dmhuynh72 e2 Member 628 forum postsdmhuynh72 vcard United Kingdom3 Constructive Critique Points
15 Sep 2010 - 10:19 AM

congrats on a well deserved EC
regards
Yung

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DaveU
DaveU e2 Member 81339 forum postsDaveU vcard England121 Constructive Critique Points
15 Sep 2010 - 11:35 AM

Lol but for me the treatment is a bit heavy on the eyes and still a little contrasty in the face ...... what do I know eh Wink

Well done Jo.

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Consulo
Consulo  10763 forum posts Scotland10 Constructive Critique Points
15 Sep 2010 - 12:16 PM

I think I might be in love a little... Grin

I never saw the original version, but this version is lovely. The mono treatment works an absolute treat.

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Coleslaw
Coleslaw e2 Member 913403 forum postsColeslaw vcard Wales28 Constructive Critique Points
15 Sep 2010 - 12:20 PM

You know you have a winner when there is no 'but...' coming out from Martin.... LOL Smile

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kitsch
kitsch  8438 forum posts United Kingdom4 Constructive Critique Points
15 Sep 2010 - 12:33 PM

oooh EC nice one thanks Pete Smile


Quote: You know you have a winner when there is no 'but...' coming out from Martin.... LOL

LOL yes i was pleasantly surprised Smile

Dave, i spent ages redoing & still ended up with the contrasty look, i know! lol

thanks all Smile

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Phil1958
Phil1958  5272 forum posts Wales4 Constructive Critique Points
15 Sep 2010 - 4:47 PM

Another stunning shot - only wish I could give 2 awards a week - this would get my second - everything about it just screams quality,

Phil

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LesF
LesF e2 Member 7176 forum postsLesF vcard 8 Constructive Critique Points
15 Sep 2010 - 7:53 PM

Congrats on the EC Jo tis a beauty of a shot

LesF

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JennB
JennB  760 forum posts United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
15 Sep 2010 - 8:21 PM

Stunning shot, love the texture.

Jenn Smile

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neilrwalker
15 Sep 2010 - 8:41 PM

Stunning portrait

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backbeat
backbeat  8134 forum posts United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
15 Sep 2010 - 9:12 PM

congrats on the EC jo, and i can totally see why Pete awarded it....stunning!

phil

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kitsch
kitsch  8438 forum posts United Kingdom4 Constructive Critique Points
15 Sep 2010 - 10:01 PM

thanks very much everyone Smile

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AlleyCatz
AlleyCatz  8274 forum posts England6 Constructive Critique Points
15 Sep 2010 - 10:14 PM

Superb as ever Jo.....and congrats on your well deserved EC Smile Smile



~Alley~

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kitsch
kitsch  8438 forum posts United Kingdom4 Constructive Critique Points
16 Sep 2010 - 5:44 PM

thanks

and cheers for your award Fred! yay! Smile

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chase
chase Critique Team 91118 forum postschase vcard England240 Constructive Critique Points
16 Sep 2010 - 8:34 PM

Lovely Jo,such a sense of innocence in those big eyes,very captivating & well processed.
Well done !

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POOCHIE
POOCHIE e2 Member 8POOCHIE vcard United Kingdom6 Constructive Critique Points
17 Sep 2010 - 11:22 PM

Gorgeous!

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kitsch
kitsch  8438 forum posts United Kingdom4 Constructive Critique Points
18 Sep 2010 - 8:16 AM

thanks Janet
and big thanks for your award Pooch!! Smile

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funkeldink
funkeldink  101592 forum posts United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
18 Sep 2010 - 12:22 PM

tis very powerful

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electricsoup
19 Sep 2010 - 9:22 PM

marvellous

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kitsch
kitsch  8438 forum posts United Kingdom4 Constructive Critique Points
22 Sep 2010 - 4:55 PM

thank you

and thanks for your user award Sean Smile much appreciated

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seanslevin
seanslevin  10 Ireland
26 Dec 2010 - 10:36 AM

My Photo of the year , superb Jo .

Sean .

Last Modified By seanslevin at 26 Dec 2010 - 10:39 AM

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kitsch
kitsch  8438 forum posts United Kingdom4 Constructive Critique Points
26 Dec 2010 - 6:51 PM

thanks Sean Smile i have a print on the wall here...one of my faves of her

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