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yet another....
probably over simplified with PP but i was just interested in the shapes really..
(btw looks dreadful on daughters laptop but ok on my screen lol)

ta for looking
Jo

Camera:Canon EOS 20D
Lens:18-55
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:*
Username:kitsch kitsch
Uploaded:9 Feb 2012 - 8:34 PM
Tags:Black & white, Digitally manipulated, Flash / lighting, Portraits / people
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derekhansen
derekhansen e2 Member 5168 forum postsderekhansen vcard United Kingdom19 Constructive Critique Points
9 Feb 2012 - 8:42 PM

Beautifully posed, lit and processed.
Derek

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k1
k1  4
9 Feb 2012 - 9:09 PM

Think this great work, well presented, the pose is good and appears to be natural.

Paul.

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JackAllTog
JackAllTog e2 Member 53469 forum postsJackAllTog vcard United Kingdom58 Constructive Critique Points
9 Feb 2012 - 9:42 PM

Absolutely super.

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Scaramanga
Scaramanga e2 Member 637 forum postsScaramanga vcard United Kingdom5 Constructive Critique Points
9 Feb 2012 - 9:43 PM

looks great on my screen.

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senn
senn e2 Member 2senn vcard Belgium1 Constructive Critique Points
9 Feb 2012 - 10:11 PM

enviable work ! ..

Last Modified By senn at 9 Feb 2012 - 10:12 PM

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Richsr
Richsr e2 Member 790 forum postsRichsr vcard England205 Constructive Critique Points
9 Feb 2012 - 10:15 PM

Like this Jo

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backbeat
backbeat e2 Member 8134 forum postsbackbeat vcard United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
9 Feb 2012 - 11:39 PM

You're so good at these Jo...congrats on another fine portrait

Phil

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luceombra
luceombra  227 forum posts Italy5 Constructive Critique Points
10 Feb 2012 - 8:33 AM

Another great work!

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ChiliMan
ChiliMan e2 Member 7135 forum postsChiliMan vcard Singapore16 Constructive Critique Points
10 Feb 2012 - 2:29 PM

I like the pose and composition, Jo.

Andrew

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Uppercut
Uppercut  7 Norway1 Constructive Critique Points
10 Feb 2012 - 11:08 PM

sorry to disagree, but I think you have pushed the levers too much here. the gray areas "take over", smudging the dark.
this is what happens when you push fill light and/or recovery over the limit.
In contrary to EC, I believe you should have "reset" and started over with what seems like a very fine portrait of a gentlemanSmile
John

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kitsch
kitsch e2 Member 8425 forum postskitsch vcard United Kingdom4 Constructive Critique Points
11 Feb 2012 - 9:41 AM

thanks everyone Smile

John, i can't disagree with you, i did think i'd gone too far with this & might well re-edit from scratch at some point Smile
as i said, was more interested in the shapes & doing something different with it
cheers
Jo

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kitsch
kitsch e2 Member 8425 forum postskitsch vcard United Kingdom4 Constructive Critique Points
11 Feb 2012 - 9:49 AM

PS thanks for the EC! Smile

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rob_marshall
13 Feb 2012 - 7:29 AM


Quote: Sorry to disagree, but I think you have pushed the levers too much here. the gray areas "take over", smudging the dark.
this is what happens when you push fill light and/or recovery over the limit.
In contrary to EC, I believe you should have "reset" and started over with what seems like a very fine portrait of a gentlemanSmile
John

Have to agree, I'm afraid. You can see it on the folds of his shirt. It's a shame as it's a very good composition of a nice-looking guy.

Last Modified By rob_marshall at 13 Feb 2012 - 7:29 AM

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