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I spotted this scene in Bath at the weekend, the girl was just sitting on the kerb lost in her thoughts while waiting for friends.

I've de-satuarted the background a little to emphasise the subject, which seems to work quite well.

I welcome some input on how to make this better, so have enabled modifications.

Thanks,

Martin

Camera:Nikon D300 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:Nikon 70-200
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Title:No Waiting
Username:Martin54 Martin54
Uploaded:18 Jun 2009 - 7:13 PM
Tags:Photo journalism, Portraits / people, Street photography
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kitsch
kitsch  8439 forum posts United Kingdom4 Constructive Critique Points
18 Jun 2009 - 7:19 PM

i don't think this could be improved really... it is wonderful as it is

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PeelNStick
PeelNStick  10 United States4 Constructive Critique Points
18 Jun 2009 - 7:45 PM

This is a good shot. I like the shallow DOF.

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lifesnapper
lifesnapper e2 Member 8lifesnapper vcard England1 Constructive Critique Points
18 Jun 2009 - 8:09 PM

Nicely composed. Perfect title.

John Smile

Last Modified By lifesnapper at 18 Jun 2009 - 8:09 PM

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Robert51
Robert51  6 United Kingdom14 Constructive Critique Points
18 Jun 2009 - 11:30 PM

Super image Martin and don't you just those bold colours. I have uploaded the selective colouring mod.

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Martin54
Martin54 e2 Member 8509 forum postsMartin54 vcard United Kingdom
19 Jun 2009 - 7:46 AM

Thanks everyone, espcially to Kitsch fot your award, much appreciated.
Martin

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dathersmith
9 Jul 2009 - 8:40 AM

An excellent candid Martin, great colour and nice dof.

Darren.

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