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I've been a 'bit out of sorts' and felt like a bit of distraction so after seeing these images done before I thought... why not? I only took a few shots as I realise this probably needs a dedicated macro lens to achieve the result I had in mind.... but basically this is a ring placed on a book with a desktop lamp for lighting..... didn't do any real manipulation to this only convert to B&W and resize.

If anyone can offer help on how I could have achieved a better result I've added the settings ...... I used the Sigma APO 70-300mm set at 240mm focal length switched to macro mode using AV priority at F5.6 and ISO 100.

Thank you for viewing and any C&C welcomed. Hope you all had a good w/end and didn't suffer too much through the torrential downpours.

Karen Smile

Title:Shadow Heart
Username:KKmoments KKmoments
Uploaded:7 Sep 2008 - 8:56 PM
Camera:Canon EOS 400D
Lens:Sigma APO 70-300mm macro
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Tags:B&w, Black & white, Book, Flash / lighting, Heart, Mono, Ring, Shadow, Specialist / abstract
Votes:44

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harrattp
7 Sep 2008 - 9:02 PM
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The best way to get a better image is to stand the ring on its edge and then the heart shape would be more pronounced. Hope that helps. Good effort all the same.

Paul

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and accompanied not only with love soft lighting , one of shakepeares most finest sonnets..!!!

Cant offer any advise Karen think just a beautiful composition and concept..!

Nikki !

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7 Sep 2008 - 9:36 PM
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I love, just LOVE, the fact that you chose a sonnet rather than a dictionary definition of the word Smile Terrific diversification, my friend... Can't offer advice - outside my experience - but now I want to have a go Smile
Allie

superb shot
Dawn

rusmi
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7 Sep 2008 - 9:41 PM
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a classic very well executed, clik

TOM

bfgstew
7 Sep 2008 - 9:57 PM
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I can only echo Paul, Allie and Nikki's advice.
Beautiful.
Stew

great shot and good comp and good the way you highlighted the part of the text you want us to see, i think the only way you could improve this sort of thing would be by standing the ring vertical in the spine and the lamp behind the ring, that way you might get the heart "outside" the ring. G

KKmoments
7 Sep 2008 - 10:33 PM
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Thanks to Paul and Grainge for the 'vertical ring' suggestion, I did try this but it kept toppling over - think I need a blu tak moment. it was through sheer lack of patience (at the mo) I lay it flat... the other thing with vertical positioning you can get longer shadows - guess what i'll be doing next Smile
But THANK YOU and I will 'redo' when I've done my yoga lol.

SurreyHillsMan
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8 Sep 2008 - 12:15 AM
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I think you've done a superb job here, loving that heart shape, it's spot on! .... maybe a sepia or a warm tint would enhance it slightly?

Jon

TyChee
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8 Sep 2008 - 1:00 AM
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Nice shadow.
Ty

taggart
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8 Sep 2008 - 3:35 AM
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Nice one Karen-- works with any lens!
jennnnn

CarolG
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8 Sep 2008 - 6:20 AM
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Superbly produced, Karen. Carol

sunshot
8 Sep 2008 - 8:19 AM
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i think that you've done a cracking job here Karen
well done indeed

marc

oneill
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8 Sep 2008 - 10:01 AM
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fantastic work,,

brownsilent
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8 Sep 2008 - 11:03 AM
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Beautiful composition, very nice sonnet, love in the shapes,
Great image,
Johanna

Very well composed & executed Karen.
Love the way it has turned out, but what about selective colour to the ring, especially if it's yellow gold....just a very subtle touch.
Hilary

Super work Karen. Super romantic capture.
Marilyn x

pamelajean
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8 Sep 2008 - 6:45 PM
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I've never tried anything like this, Karen, and like what you have done here, especially the particular verse and heart shape. I feel a little toning might enhance the image and, unusual for me to go for this, just a touch shallower dof.

StevePix
8 Sep 2008 - 7:57 PM
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Love the shot, I also read DCM

Glostopcat
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11 Sep 2008 - 6:50 PM
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An excellent concept which you've executed so well, I can't offer any advice or suggestions i'm afraid as i've never thought about, let alone tried anything like this before

lonely_oryx
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12 Sep 2008 - 7:36 PM
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Great idea

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