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At last i saw some watery sky, broke down with a holy touch. green became more green, live became lively again after a long thirsty hot sun.

Brand:NIKON CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D5000 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:50.0 mm f/1.8
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:2 Sep 2011 - 7:18 AM
Focal Length:50mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/1.7
Aperture:f/2.0
Shutter Speed:1/100sec
Exposure Comp:-2.0
ISO:125
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:No Flash
Title:Watery fresh
Username:kunal_seal kunal_seal
Uploaded:22 May 2012 - 4:49 AM
Tags:Close-up / macro, Flowers & plants, General
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pamelajean
pamelajean Critique Team 8831 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1638 Constructive Critique Points
22 May 2012 - 6:45 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

I assume that you welcome the rain, Kunal.
In England, we have had rain for a long time and it has only just started to feel like summer.
I like the way you have captured the rain droplets on the left, with a nice bokeh in the background. The leaf has a touch of colour, which breaks up the green.
You have used a very shallow depth of field, focusing on the droplets, which is extremely effective.
The leaf on the right is a distraction and can be cropped away.
In my modification, I did that crop whilst maintaining your aspect ratio. I also cloned out the little leaf in the bottom middle, just to tidy the image up and focus all attention on the leaf with the droplets. I adjusted levels a little and sharpened, to make the droplets sparkle.
Pamela.

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kunal_seal
24 May 2012 - 4:43 AM

Thank you Pamelajean mam..

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