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Ezt a képet a lakóházam udvarából készítettem

Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:cloud
Username:Laslo Laslo
Uploaded:25 Jan 2012 - 6:20 PM
Tags:Landscape / travel
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mhfore
mhfore  7 England176 Constructive Critique Points
25 Jan 2012 - 7:13 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Hi Laszlo,
I can see you have tried to capture the clouds in this image. Clouds can be a fantastic and rewarding subject, try and find some interesting foreground to help lead your eye. Look up the rule of thirds and try to compose your shots with that in mind, you can always crop your shots in a photo program to create a more pleasing image.

There is not alot you can do with your image but to quickly show you what could be achieved with a bit of practice I have made some slight adjustments, have a look.

Keep shooting and keep practicing but always remember take images that please you not other people. Wink

Martin

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NEWMANP
NEWMANP e2 Member 61587 forum postsNEWMANP vcard United Kingdom574 Constructive Critique Points
25 Jan 2012 - 7:34 PM

hello, and a warm welcome to epz.

its a fair shot of the clouds but maybe it hasnt really enough subject content. i think its a little lacking in foreground interest to cativate the attention for very long, its a sort of cross between the rooflines and then clouds.

if your ability to get out and about was a little restricted, why not be even bolder and just take the sky, but perhaps tilt the camera so the clouds area are at a jaunty diagonal angle and make the image more of an abstract.

regards
Phil

Last Modified By NEWMANP at 25 Jan 2012 - 7:36 PM

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paulbroad
paulbroad  782 forum posts United Kingdom863 Constructive Critique Points
25 Jan 2012 - 8:17 PM

You ideally need to specific strong type of cloud to give the desired impact with low lighting, or light of a strong nature. The roof and wires are also a bit of a distraction - you need a more interesting object in the foreground.

Paul

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Laslo
Laslo  2 Serbia and Montenegro
25 Jan 2012 - 9:11 PM

Thanks for the helpful criticism. This picture is in fact I asked tentatively. Since I'm new here and I understood what the rules of uploading, the picture already has been approved. I look forward to it continues to be good advice Regards Laci

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