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A picture of one of Amsterdam's parks created in 2011 year. The retouched image.

Brand:NIKON CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D3100 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:AF-S DX Nikkor 18-55mm VR Check out Nikon Nation!
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:17 Oct 2011 - 1:44 AM
Focal Length:35mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/5.1
Aperture:f/5.0
Shutter Speed:1/60sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:640
Exposure Mode:Not Defined
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Auto, Did not fire
Title:flowers. 000
Username:Laslo Laslo
Uploaded:6 Feb 2012 - 8:11 AM
Tags:Close-up / macro
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This photo is here for critique. Please only comment constructively and with suggestions on how to improve it.
banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10933 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2945 Constructive Critique Points
6 Feb 2012 - 7:50 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

This is your best shot so far Laslo.

Its a nice study of a Hydrangea bloom, with nice delicate colours.

The exposure in the actual flower is close, but with a small amount of added exposure and colour correction (white balance) it looks more vibrant.

You have composed the shot off centre, - which will work most of the time. When you have a single, specimen shot like this one, it can also work well if its right in the middle.

I have loaded a mod with the changes, and a little sharpening, so you can see the difference.

Good work, - youre improving!



Regards


Willie

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