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Took yhis in Worcester.Do you think the crop at the legs spoils this too much?

Camera:canon eos 20d
Lens:70-200L
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Violinist
Username:Lawrence Lawrence
Uploaded:25 Oct 2008 - 7:20 PM
Tags:Photo journalism, Violin.worcrster
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Paintman
Paintman e2 Member 7835 forum postsPaintman vcard United Kingdom172 Constructive Critique Points
26 Oct 2008 - 8:43 AM

I think you could crop the left-hand side quite a bit as it doesn't add much to the image. This would improve the composition by focussing more on the violinist.

It looks like it could do with a slight increase in contrast ( levels and curves ) and some sharpening too.

You could do a mono version of this to see if this has greater impact.

Alan.

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Lawrence
Lawrence  11195 forum posts United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
26 Oct 2008 - 12:34 PM

Thanks Alan for your comments

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