Nice sky on this shot, but for me, the composition needs work. There's a little too much going on in the shot and would be better if it weren't so centre heavy as both the church and tree are bang in the middle. Would have been better a little more side on. Seems to be some distortion from the lens that needs correcting and the shot needs straightening. Also, it would work better if the tree wasn't cropped and if it didn't overlap the church slightly. Nice mood to it though.

Nice idea and tells a lovely story. But i'd have gotten lower to give it a more interesting angle, and would have moved right and turned left to seperate the people from the Sun and avoid having everything so central. Love the little lad holding the Dad's hand. Very touching. Great emotion.

Nice soft light in the sky, but the light painted rocks don't work for me because of the quality of the light. Watch the tilt on the right/barrel distortion.