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Just finished my first product modelling shoot. Here's one of my favourite images from the shoot. Advice and comments on how i could improve this image would be greatly appreciated.

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 450D
Lens:EF50mm f/1.8 II
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:1 Feb 2011 - 7:36 PM
Focal Length:50mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/1.8
Aperture:f/6.7
Shutter Speed:1/125sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:On, Fired
Title:Electronic Cigarette
Username:Liamscottbell Liamscottbell
Uploaded:5 Feb 2011 - 10:57 PM
Tags:Black & white, Portraits / people
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fudgy
fudgy  448 forum posts United Kingdom
5 Feb 2011 - 11:00 PM

I am in no position to tell you how top improve it ...it looks amazing to me as it is.Smile

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zebraboy
zebraboy  10197 forum posts Australia
5 Feb 2011 - 11:42 PM

Superbly lit, I'd be very happy with that. nice one. M

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Daisymaye
Daisymaye e2 Member 6Daisymaye vcard Canada9 Constructive Critique Points
6 Feb 2011 - 2:25 PM

Looks very good, I might just black out beyond the shadow, it tends to pull my eye from him...........Sandy

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Jestertheclown

Not much I'd change here either.

I've uploaded a mod. in which I've gone for a square format, increasing the canvas on the right, placing the guy's face on a third(ish) and cloned the pale area that Daisymaye's mentioned above.

I'm not suggesting it's an improvement, just a different slant on it.

Bren.

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Liamscottbell

like the mod however i think i prefer that lil bit on the other side dont know why just do.

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roney24
roney24  3
11 Sep 2011 - 12:33 AM

I believe that electronic cigarettes are an excellent technology and the potential cost savings to our health care will prove to be tremendous, with this product you can enjoy ecigs anywhere, smokeless cigarettes are a great technology. http://www.ecigaretteit.com/

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