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Old truck peeking out beside an old barn.

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 50D
Lens:28-300mm, tamron Check out Totally Tamron!
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:14 Feb 2010 - 10:52 AM
Focal Length:208mm
Aperture:f/7.1
Shutter Speed:1/320sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:1600
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:Vintage
Username:LisaDelp LisaDelp
Uploaded:16 Jul 2011 - 4:09 PM
Tags:"vintage vehicle", General
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ExT_Racer
ExT_Racer e2 Member 555 forum postsExT_Racer vcard Wales
16 Jul 2011 - 4:24 PM

And on its last legs!

Paddy.

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LisaDelp
LisaDelp  3 United States
16 Jul 2011 - 4:32 PM

Yes, long past it's glory days.

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Digby
Digby e2 Member 641 forum postsDigby vcard Wales
16 Jul 2011 - 4:32 PM

Nice composition

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LisaDelp
LisaDelp  3 United States
16 Jul 2011 - 4:34 PM

Thank you! appreciate the feedback.

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pablo69
pablo69  6200 forum posts England7 Constructive Critique Points
16 Jul 2011 - 8:44 PM

Great composition, I would like to see more contrast in it, also like the b&w conversion suits both well, give the feeling that it is looking at you

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kinfatric
kinfatric  9550 forum posts Scotland9 Constructive Critique Points
16 Jul 2011 - 10:47 PM

Its really all about the car so I've taken this opportunity in a mod to edit it in a style I think shows its rustic qualities....a fine image by the way. I wish I could come across opportunities such as this. I've cropped it and used selective colouring, added contrast with the use of curves, sharpened selectively

Last Modified By kinfatric at 16 Jul 2011 - 10:49 PM

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LisaDelp
LisaDelp  3 United States
17 Jul 2011 - 12:59 AM

Thank you both for the modifications and comments. The black and white gives the sense of being really old which goes along with the subject matter. The enhanced color of the truck only makes it really stand out as the subject matter. Thank you, Lisa

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10818 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2820 Constructive Critique Points
17 Jul 2011 - 6:08 PM

I really like the concept here Lisa, - the old car either looking in from the past, or fading out of the present. the addition of the old door is a nice touch.

Since the car is the focal posint though, I would suggest getting the sharpest focus on the car rather than the door, and having the door a little soft.

The car itself does benefit with both contrast and sharpening, and I would suggest, - to de emphasize the door, both cropping a large part of it out, and applying some blur.


I have loaded this in a mod, - hope this is helpful,


Regards


Willie

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LisaDelp
LisaDelp  3 United States
18 Jul 2011 - 6:25 AM

Hi Willie,

thank you! brilliant suggestion and modification. Lisa

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