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Just after a bit of C&C really as I've done some work on this image, is it too much ? The couple loved this shot (unedited) so thought I'd have a play with it.

Camera:Fuji S3
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Tickets please
Username:lollydeakins lollydeakins
Uploaded:6 Jun 2009 - 9:58 PM
Tags:Fashion, Photo journalism, Portraits / people, Wedding / social
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lollydeakins
6 Jun 2009 - 10:00 PM

Thought I'd add the bus driver wasn't impressed when they didn't actually get on !

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_  9535 forum posts Virgin Islands, British4 Constructive Critique Points
6 Jun 2009 - 10:04 PM

I'm not too keen on the burning and blurring you've been doing to this one.
Although it is very obvious to me, that doesn't mean to say that your clients will notice it.

The only thing I don't like about the shot as a shot is the groom is too tight to the right hand frame edge.

Just curious: Why spend the extra time on a shot that your clients already love?

Cheers,
J

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lollydeakins
6 Jun 2009 - 10:10 PM

Thanks John, You are right I think. This was from a wedding ages ago, Im bored and thought Id have a play in Corel.... I was trying to give it a bit of umphh (thats the technical term!) but its overcooked a bit me thinks :o)
As for the crop, its straight out the camera and there were odd looking people behind him plus the fact I had about 5 seconds to get the shot before the bus driver closed the doors on them! :o)
Lorraine.

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PeelNStick
PeelNStick  10 United States4 Constructive Critique Points
7 Jun 2009 - 12:08 AM

Dreamy shot. Good work.

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angie44
angie44  5
7 Jun 2009 - 10:57 AM

i think its a great shot and glad they like it , its good to play , well done angie

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mrswoolybill
mrswoolybill Critique Team 7440 forum postsmrswoolybill vcard United Kingdom1028 Constructive Critique Points
7 Jun 2009 - 12:54 PM

Terrific fun, and a very individual, personal reminder for the couple - I'm not surprised they liked it.
Wedding photography seems to have become so glossy, artificial, so often it seems to be a matter of maufactured memories. This is real!
Moira

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