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Portrait of my eldest daughter Stephanie

comments welcome

Lou x

Camera:Samsung Check out Samsung NX Generation!
Lens:35mm
Recording media:n/a
Title:** STEPHANIE**
Username:Lou41 Lou41
Uploaded:3 Jan 2006 - 6:18 AM
Tags:People, Portrait, Portraits / people
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Mikearty
Mikearty  8
3 Jan 2006 - 6:41 AM

well you have a very attractive daughter, with the right lighting you could really take some knock-out shots of her! click

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Lou41
Lou41  9139 forum posts United Kingdom
3 Jan 2006 - 6:44 AM

Thanks Mike, not very good with people portraits but i will keep trying, any advice will be greatly appreaciated, LOU x

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leons_photos
3 Jan 2006 - 6:47 AM

Love the blue eyes!
Is she available for a drink? Smile
Click!

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buchananbchb
3 Jan 2006 - 6:55 AM

This is a nice portrait shot Lou, I have only just started taking these type of pictures myself, I find the background a little distracting, but I like the lighting, really helps bring out your daughters lovely features, well done, and nice work with the eye.
Brad.

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55jase
55jase  9186 forum posts United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
3 Jan 2006 - 6:59 AM

great shot. i find the shadow around the side of her head a tad to much other wise spot on.
jase

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Maddie
Maddie  92714 forum posts United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
3 Jan 2006 - 7:01 AM

hi lou, on my screen the left eye is a bit red!

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akh e2 Member 101142 forum postsakh vcard United Kingdom5 Constructive Critique Points
3 Jan 2006 - 7:06 AM

I think it could be improved if you crop away some of the LH side and adjust the levels to get a touch more contrast. I also can see one blue eye and one red one.
Tony

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Mikearty
Mikearty  8
3 Jan 2006 - 7:08 AM

I just uploaded a mod Lou, hope you like it.cheers Mike.

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Jasbe
Jasbe  9116 forum posts England
3 Jan 2006 - 7:51 AM

Nice portrait shot, the lighting on the face looks spot on, try a lamp or off camera flash from the side as well, this should remove the unwanted shadows.
Cheers, Jason

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kinfatric
kinfatric  10550 forum posts Scotland9 Constructive Critique Points
3 Jan 2006 - 7:59 AM

a ' bonny lass ' as some would say north of the border Smile

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Hazard
Hazard  101192 forum posts United Kingdom
3 Jan 2006 - 8:04 AM

a nice portrait

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Lou41
Lou41  9139 forum posts United Kingdom
3 Jan 2006 - 8:04 AM

Thanks everyone for your comments and advice and modification, sorry Leon she's got a boyfriend lol, LOU x

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jeffa
jeffa  932 forum posts United Kingdom
3 Jan 2006 - 10:31 AM

Nice portrait Lou
Jeff

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Lou41
Lou41  9139 forum posts United Kingdom
3 Jan 2006 - 11:07 AM

thanks Jeff

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MoWiz
MoWiz  9114 forum posts United Kingdom
3 Jan 2006 - 11:47 AM

Gorgeous Girl, beautiful portrait, well done, you both must be happy with this.

Mo

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Lou41
Lou41  9139 forum posts United Kingdom
3 Jan 2006 - 1:24 PM

Thanks Mo, i like it but i feel i could improve with the help of EpZ friends! LOU x

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leons_photos
4 Jan 2006 - 7:05 AM

Darn!! Smile

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Marian
Marian  962 forum posts England
4 Jan 2006 - 10:33 AM

What a lovely model your daughter makes. I liked the selective colouring on the eye, but found the background a little distracting.
Marian
EDIT: Just seen the "mod" by Mikearty, which I think is good, it's given your image a more dramatic look having taken out the background.

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Lou41
Lou41  9139 forum posts United Kingdom
4 Jan 2006 - 11:08 AM

Thanks Marian, yes i do like the Mod and think it's alot better. cheers, LOU x

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highlander
highlander  1032 forum posts Scotland
4 Jan 2006 - 12:48 PM

Good portrait Louise, she is looking good and your camera work has captured her beauty well.
Doug.

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Lou41
Lou41  9139 forum posts United Kingdom
4 Jan 2006 - 1:06 PM

Thanks Doug x Smile

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mulder
mulder  8 United Kingdom
21 Jan 2006 - 4:23 PM

Lovely portrait.
The black and white works well.


Floyd

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Lou41
Lou41  9139 forum posts United Kingdom
17 May 2006 - 4:30 AM

thanks everyone!! x

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ronss
ronss  81243 forum posts Canada
29 Jul 2006 - 3:47 AM

Lovely shot of an attractive young woman.
click.

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