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Camera:Sony alpha 100
Lens:Sigma 28mm Prime Lens
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Title:AFRICAN CHILDREN
Username:MaccaPhoto MaccaPhoto
Uploaded:10 Sep 2009 - 2:46 PM
Tags:Black & white, General, Portraits / people
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Two wonderful images - lovely work

Chris

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DRicherby
DRicherby  6269 forum posts United Kingdom725 Constructive Critique Points
7 Oct 2009 - 8:32 PM

#1 is very strong because of the eye-contact from the smaller child. That locks the viewer into the scene and makes us wonder what's so interesting that the older child is looking away from the camera. #2 doesn't work so well, for me: it doesn't have the tension. Maybe there's something big happening over there; maybe the kid just didn't notice you taking the photograph.

I think they're both a little over-exposed, though. In these sorts of conditions, the sky's likely to blow out anyway, but there's some blown-out stuff on the ground in both shots. A bit darker would increase the intensity, I think.

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