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7 Oct 2009 - 8:32 PM

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DRicherby

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7 Oct 2009 - 8:32 PM

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#1 is very strong because of the eye-contact from the smaller child. That locks the viewer into the scene and makes us wonder what's so interesting that the older child is looking away from the camera. #2 doesn't work so well, for me: it doesn't have the tension. Maybe there's something big happening over there; maybe the kid just didn't notice you taking the photograph.

I think they're both a little over-exposed, though. In these sorts of conditions, the sky's likely to blow out anyway, but there's some blown-out stuff on the ground in both shots. A bit darker would increase the intensity, I think.