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I think you left in the oof point of the leaf as the background there adds to the 3d perspective if the whole image; still, I think that portion is too distracting; why not try another crop(&rotation) as that also brings the point of interest (the beginning) more to the center of gravity of the image. alfred
I hardly dare to make a comment on portraits as I rarely make them; but for me the image looks fine, maybe a slight overexposure; i like the decentralized position but would have liked just a little bit extra space on the right. Anyway, for me it is a very successful first studio portrait you've made.