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| Camera: | Sony A200 |
| Lens: | Sony DT 18-70mm F3.5-5.6 |
| Recording media: | JPEG (digital) |
| Title: | relaxing...... |
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| Uploaded: | 8 Feb 2012 - 6:37 AM |
| Tags: | Close-up / macro, Flowers & plants, Wildlife / nature |
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Whilst it's well seen and the birds are pleasingly arranged, I'm afraid the out of focus stuff is a bit of a distraction, and the birds are not well lit. If they were both in sunlight, their plumage would be less dull. Also, it isn't that sharp.
IMHO, I think cropping to place the birds nearer the left side and losing the branch bottom right would help, and a little selective brightening on the birds should improve the look of the picture.
The good thing is that there are lots of birds, and practice is easy to get!
Nick
I'm guessing that this is a crop from something much larger and that the camera's lens was at full stretch? Apart from the softness, there's some CA in there as well.
Those Sony lenses are really pretty good but they're really not long enough to capture shots like this.
Sorry if that all sounds a bit negative.
Bren.
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