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See my previous notes, this is to illustrate the effect of removing the turbines as commented. BTW, the lens designation is correct on this one.

Camera:Canon EOS 50D
Lens:EF 70-200L IS
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Title:Sail Away to Another Place #2
Username:malc_c malc_c
Uploaded:17 Mar 2010 - 10:59 AM
Tags:Another place, Crosby, Landscape / travel, Mersey
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Well composed image -

Chris

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BarryC123
BarryC123  543 forum posts Ireland25 Constructive Critique Points
17 Mar 2010 - 11:30 AM

HI, Malcolm. I've read your comments and can see what you mean about the movement of the turbines being part of what you intended, and also that the image is very bare without them.
In saying that, I must still prefer the simpler image, composition-wise, if not meaning-wise, if that makes any sense.

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crookymonsta e2 Member 6675 forum postscrookymonsta vcard England10 Constructive Critique Points
17 Mar 2010 - 12:04 PM

Although the removal of the wind turbines has given a less cluttered image I think I prefer them in. If you removed the ship as well you would have the makings of an interesting triptych. A very different depiction of one of Gormley's figures, makes a change from sunsets!
Sandra

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xwang
xwang  431 forum posts7 Constructive Critique Points
17 Mar 2010 - 4:14 PM

I would keep some turbines on the right, and clear the view of the ships.What do you think?
xiaoli

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xwang  431 forum posts7 Constructive Critique Points
17 Mar 2010 - 4:38 PM

What about remove two- three turbines? The ones on the top of the container. The turbines give a kind of visual distance, match your title"...away...".

Last Modified By xwang at 17 Mar 2010 - 4:46 PM

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malc_c
malc_c  7 England167 Constructive Critique Points
17 Mar 2010 - 6:03 PM

It's fine if you prefer the bare version Barry, it just lacks something to set it apart for me though.

Like a triptych maybe - interesting idea Sandra... I presume you're thinking of something like THIS?
malc

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