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Calm seas at Ramla l-Hamra, Gozo

Brand:Samsung
Camera:GT-I9000
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Metering Mode:Unknown (65535)
Flash:No flash function
Title:Sea of Tranquility
Username:manjoy manjoy
Uploaded:29 Apr 2011 - 8:47 AM
Tags:Landscape / travel
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Paintman
Paintman e2 Member 8857 forum postsPaintman vcard United Kingdom173 Constructive Critique Points
30 Apr 2011 - 8:48 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

I think the photo lacks contrast and a real focal point. The large rock seems to be that point but it's not large enough in the image. In trying to include everything the photo's impact is reduced. If you try to compose the shot thinking 'how can I simplify the elements within the viewfinder and still get my message across', then you'll have an image with more power for the viewer.

The mod has increased contrast and colour and is also sharpened.

The scene probably needs better or more dramatic lighting to realize its full potential.

Alan.

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