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This is part of a series of pictures being used in a documentary about the effects of construction in the Spanish landscape.

Camera:Canon EOS 350D
Lens:18-55
Title:In construction
Username:marietafs marietafs
Uploaded:27 Jan 2007 - 1:38 PM
Tags:Architecture, Construction, Documentary, Empty, House, Photo journalism, Specialist / abstract, White
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Tooth
Tooth  95772 forum posts Ireland227 Constructive Critique Points
28 Jan 2007 - 10:14 AM

As a photo in its own right I think the subject matter is a bit mundane and you need to struggle to make it interseting. I like the graphic qualities of this - I'd suggest cropping from the top to bring the top left diagonal into the corner.

The whole thing is a bit "washed out" and abit of work with contrast or preferably the burn brush and/or curves would help bring out detail in the interior

Hop ethat's some use

Stephen

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flaggy  81 Constructive Critique Points
28 Jan 2007 - 1:40 PM

What an awesome background to put a subject in. Why can I never find locations like this?

There's a million things you could do here with a million different subjects.

Great background but it really is only that. There isn't any subject to be seen.

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JohnLynch
JohnLynch  678 forum posts Ireland6 Constructive Critique Points
27 Mar 2009 - 3:26 PM

I find it interesting. This is the skeleton of someones dream holiday/home. When it is decontextualised like this, it fails to convey any drama. However within a body of work "about the effects of construction in the Spanish landscape" I can imagine it could work very effectively. It reminds me of Donavan Wylie or Daniel Traub and Robert Harding Pittman or John Duncan.

JL

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