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Its a plant, some may even say a flower, and it grows in my garden Smile

Thats all I know about it.

Just playing around with the Macro lens

All comments appreciated

Thanks
Mark

Camera:Sony A350
Lens:70mm
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:27 Jun 2012 - 6:41 PM
Focal Length:70mm
Aperture:f/10.0
Shutter Speed:1/30sec
ISO:100
Title:In my garden
Username:mark2uk mark2uk
Uploaded:28 Jun 2012 - 8:04 PM
Tags:Close-up / macro, Flowers & plants
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paskinmj
paskinmj  5 United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
28 Jun 2012 - 8:56 PM

Great macro.
Matt

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mikesmith e2 Member 1045 forum postsmikesmith vcard United Kingdom35 Constructive Critique Points
28 Jun 2012 - 9:33 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

It's known as Grannies Pincushion or Astrantia and comes in many shades of pink/white/purple

As for the shot...you have isolated it well from the background flowers however the focus is not pin sharp (excuse the pun). Did you use a tripod or shutter release cable or did the lens have a VR facility if hand-held?? The square crop suits the subject matter and overall it appears you have the saturation right. It's simply the focus that's not quite right. Hope that helps....you were after a bit of cc

Mike

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banehawi Critique Team 10868 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2867 Constructive Critique Points
29 Jun 2012 - 3:26 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

You got lucky with this Mark, - time to buy a lottery ticket!

The shutter speed is impossibly slow for this shot to work, but it did, - you must have steady hands or a good support.

The focus is in fact right on, but whats not right is that you didnt sharpen the shot before you up-loaded it, and when I sharpened it in the mod, did it ever come alive!

It works best with a square crop, blur everything else. and add some contrast, - and you have the mod.

Next time, rule for minimum handheld speed is 1/(focal length * crop factor), - and even faster the closer you are to the subject, so this should have been around 1/160 by the book!



Hope this helps,



regards



Willie

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mark2uk
mark2uk  8739 forum posts England8 Constructive Critique Points
29 Jun 2012 - 6:55 AM

Thanks Willie and Mike,

Still learning so thanks for the advice and comments very much appreciated.

Willie, you are right I id completely forget to sharpen the shot.

Many thanks
Mark

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Focus_Man
Focus_Man  4481 forum posts United Kingdom631 Constructive Critique Points
30 Jun 2012 - 9:31 AM

Once again I believe the square crop generally suits flower heads and distractions are not welcome. For that reason I like to see an isolated head, but when it is not possible, even by 'photographic gardening' (Physically moving distractions out of the frame without damaging the plant) they are better either cloned out or totally diffused by differential focussing.

Here the main distraction as I am sure you can see, is the small flower head to the bottom left corner.

Willie's mod takes care of that by cropping it out and the picture as you can also see is all the better for it. If however, for some reason you really wanted to leave the picture size as it is, you could clone it out.

You have here a beautiful head well worth spending time in reproducing, try to get closer and a square crop and you then have it well covered.

Frank

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AliciaWxoxo
12 Aug 2012 - 5:10 PM

Beautiful flower and brilliant focus on it too. Sharpening it may help but it looks good.
Alicia

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