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Taken at the Buckinghamshire steam railway.

Run through Photomatix tonemapper.

The colour version looked over processed so converted to Black and white.

Your thoughts on the resulting image?

Thanks
Mark

Camera:Sony A350
Lens:18-70mm f/3.5-4.5 G
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:8 Aug 2010 - 1:11 PM
Focal Length:45mm
Aperture:f/7.1
Shutter Speed:1/80sec
ISO:100
Title:The Yard
Username:mark2uk mark2uk
Uploaded:1 Jun 2012 - 10:06 PM
Tags:Black & white, Buckinghamshire steam railway, Carriage, Quainton, Rails, Railway, Transport
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RLF
RLF e2 Member 4RLF vcard United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
2 Jun 2012 - 7:51 AM

The film "The Train" (Burt Lancaster).
Great effectGrin

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10821 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2821 Constructive Critique Points
2 Jun 2012 - 10:18 PM

Its quite good, but the trains are way to close to the top. So you need more clouds and less tracks to balance the composition.


Ive tried to show what I mean in the mod, - did a quick addition of canvas and fake clouds, but you should get the idea. Its also a duo tone which might be worth trying too.



Hope this helps,



regards




Willie

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