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At a Government House Jocko's Club event (Old Fashioned Picnic), was a photo booth where people could dress up in period costumes. This one is of my youngest daughter. She already had on a dress, but wanted to put on a dress from 100+ years ago. She has a slight smug - upperclass look to her, in this photo. I'll upload the coloured version in a few hours. After I upload it, tell me which one you like best and why. I am open to any constructive critiques and comments on this photograph.

Brand:NIKON CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D5100 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:AF-S NIKKOR 55-300mm 1:4.5-5.6 G ED Check out Nikon Nation!
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Date Taken:12 Jul 2014 - 12:40 PM
Focal Length:150mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/4.8
Aperture:f/4.8
Shutter Speed:1/500sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Center-weighted average
Flash:No Flash
White Balance:Auto
Title:Playing Dressup
Username:Marty_Woodcock Marty_Woodcock
Uploaded:21 Jul 2014 - 10:24 PM
Tags:Black & white, Children, Dress, Dressup, Government house, Greyscale, Jocko's Club, Monochrome, Old fashioned, Portraits / people, Regina
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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10868 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2867 Constructive Critique Points
22 Jul 2014 - 5:42 PM

Prefer this one. I would make the right side the same tone as the rest though.


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Willie

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Marty_Woodcock
Marty_Woodcock e2 Member Marty_Woodcock vcard Canada
22 Jul 2014 - 6:30 PM

Thanks for the modification and the suggestions. The crop reminds me of the old polaroid pictures. Very square. It just needs the white border and the thick bottom "description" border.


Quote: Prefer this one. I would make the right side the same tone as the rest though.


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Willie

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Marty_Woodcock e2 Member Marty_Woodcock vcard Canada
22 Jul 2014 - 6:34 PM

I burnt the right side background because it was a bit distracting to the main subject. To me, it appears (in the greyscale version), the right side is in some kind of wall-less, outside "room", and is naturally darker. It's actually a roof-covered entrance area.

Last Modified By Marty_Woodcock at 22 Jul 2014 - 6:36 PM

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