This is a wonderful idea for a shot, the picture is well exposed and the natural light has really worked, good stuff!
Unfortunately, in my opinion it misses a few things. The flower is not totally in the shot and isn't completely open which is a shame. And being able to see the finger with pink nail varnish (i think) is really distracting. Moving a tiny bit to the right would mean that the eye you can see would be more central instead of appearing to be looking to the left a bit, and would have straightened the face up that tiny bit more, and framing to include the whole flower would have put the face in the middle of the picture too.