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Just got a new camera for my birthday yesterday so I was having a play around, quite like this shot but I'm sure it could be improved! Criticism welcome, thanks x

Camera:Sony A200
Title:Light
Username:mckenna__bee mckenna__bee
Uploaded:25 Sep 2008 - 8:52 PM
Tags:Close-up / macro, Flash / lighting, Lamp, Light
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Sahyadri
Sahyadri  661 forum posts India2 Constructive Critique Points
25 Sep 2008 - 9:09 PM

i call this Mckenna's gold! excellent abstract. very well done. ( and many happy returns of the day)

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SlowSong
SlowSong e2 Member 64838 forum postsSlowSong vcard England29 Constructive Critique Points
25 Sep 2008 - 9:20 PM

Super shapes and lighting. Just a few spots need to be cloned out for tidiness sake.
Chris

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BERTRAM
BERTRAM  6 United Kingdom
25 Sep 2008 - 9:22 PM


Quote: Super shapes and lighting. Just a few spots need to be cloned out for tidiness sake.
Chris

With regards Dave

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Naidie
Naidie  6 United Kingdom
25 Sep 2008 - 9:45 PM

I love the simplicity of the shapes and colour. Works really well.

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10986 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2982 Constructive Critique Points
25 Sep 2008 - 10:32 PM

Shapes, light and curves all nice, - also presented tastefully.



W

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lonely_oryx
lonely_oryx e2 Member 761 forum postslonely_oryx vcard England54 Constructive Critique Points
26 Sep 2008 - 12:42 PM

Interesesting abstract. You could think about trimming off some of the left hand side to give a better composition

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RRRhea
RRRhea  6 United Kingdom
26 Sep 2008 - 7:23 PM

Love the shapes of the silouettes

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kiddsta1
kiddsta1  7 Australia
28 Sep 2008 - 1:13 AM

Great shot well done how did you get the light behind looks great

Paul

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tdc
tdc  639 forum posts United Kingdom
12 Oct 2008 - 6:32 PM

Just echoing the thoughts of others, the ligting and lines are fantastic. Happy Birthday.

Trevor

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SRC15
SRC15  6 United Kingdom
17 Oct 2008 - 3:19 PM


Quote: Shapes, light and curves all nice, - also presented tastefully.

i agree, Nice won Grin

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Paree
Paree e2 Member 9603 forum postsParee vcard 3 Constructive Critique Points
22 Nov 2008 - 10:45 PM

brilliant work
so well done
paree

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ThePivot
ThePivot  6 Ireland
18 Jan 2009 - 12:52 PM

Excellent pic!

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Ginamagnolia
28 Aug 2009 - 5:33 PM

I can't think of how this could be improved! It's very atmospheric and you've used some lovely shapes.
Gina

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