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Dapper (an Old Boy at the Market)

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Thanks for viewing, critique/comments welcome

Not so sure about this one..I'll give it a try and see

Camera:Canon EOS 350D
Lens:50mm 1.8
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Dapper (an Old Boy at the Market)
Username:TommyStr TommyStr
Uploaded:14 Feb 2008 - 9:29 AM
Tags:Bikaner, India, Landscape / travel, Market, Photo journalism, Portraits / people
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BrillacFr
14 Feb 2008 - 10:04 AM
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I love this image with the old man highlighted & the others in sahdow. Great shot!
Charlotte

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mrswoolybill
mrswoolybill (Critique Team)
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133 forum postsmrswoolybill vcard United Kingdom337 Constructive Critique Points
14 Feb 2008 - 10:26 AM
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'Dapper' is the word that used to be applied. You don't hear it often now, just as you don't see many gentlemen dressed like this, at least in the West. He's of a time and an age. Beautiful, quiet social observation.
Moira

Last Modified By mrswoolybill at 14 Feb 2008 - 10:26 AM
robs
robs (e2 Member)
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653 forum postsrobs vcard United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
14 Feb 2008 - 10:28 AM
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I like it - the unusual lighting of the old boy lit up perfectly with everything else going on in the shadows works really very well Wink

TommyStr
14 Feb 2008 - 10:30 AM
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Thanks, I'm using your comments for a new title Smile

It's another winner Tommy. Love how he stands out, both because of the dof and the light on him. Almost as if you hazed the bg, allthough I don't think you did. The large version shows a delightfull sharpness and is certainly recommended. The man makes for an interesting enough subject, the setting makes for an interesting enough setting and the figures in the bg make for interesting enough figures in the bg.

TommyStr
14 Feb 2008 - 11:19 AM
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Thanks. If I thought of darkening the bg seperately, I would still have been to lazy to actually do it. The whole image is darken a bit though, but the light was like this (+ it hit parts of the bag in the corner which I burned). His pose could have been more interesting though

Far too many 'interestings' here! He does stand out though as looking very 'western' in an 'eastern' place. What I have to admit I find distracting are the bright flashes of light in the far background. A difficult one I agree, so many good things but I am just that tiny bit unsure too!

proz
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205 forum posts United States
14 Feb 2008 - 4:22 PM
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superb candid

AnneWorner
AnneWorner (e2 Member)
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576 forum postsAnneWorner vcard United States39 Constructive Critique Points
14 Feb 2008 - 4:29 PM
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My first thought was "How much better than this can it get". The central figure stands out beautifully - the dof is superb, the background figures discretely there in the dark, just as an interesting bit of the scene.
I do agree the lights at the back draw the eye a bit, but what the ****do you do with those kind of strong highlights - I say just ignore them Smile Unless you feel pressed to play in PS, and that can be such a bore. It's real life, someone reminded me of that today. Does it all have to be fixed and air brushed. OK - I'm off my soapbox now.
I LOVE THIS!
Anne

TommyStr
14 Feb 2008 - 5:55 PM
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Glad you like it Anne, thanks proz.
Thanks Lydia (good to have a critiquer now that Koen has gone soft and only has good things to say Wink)

Last Modified By TommyStr at 14 Feb 2008 - 5:56 PM
NevP
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853 forum posts Canada13 Constructive Critique Points
14 Feb 2008 - 7:10 PM
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Stunning, beautifully caught, the highlights don't bother me at all. It's real life, brilliantly caught.

Pricey
Pricey (e2 Member)
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Pricey vcard United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
14 Feb 2008 - 7:21 PM
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Great candid, love the way you have isolated the main subject using DOF.

backbeat
backbeat (e2 Member)
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130 forum postsbackbeat vcard United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
14 Feb 2008 - 10:14 PM
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congrats on the HC tommy...this really deserves it, but i'm a bit jealous of his threads...

phil

kitsch
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425 forum posts United Kingdom4 Constructive Critique Points
14 Feb 2008 - 10:18 PM
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fabulous shot Tommy!
congrats too Smile

jo

AnneWorner
AnneWorner (e2 Member)
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576 forum postsAnneWorner vcard United States39 Constructive Critique Points
14 Feb 2008 - 10:21 PM
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Oh I'm "chuffed" for you - well deserved!
Slit 'an med helsen.
Anne

mrswoolybill
mrswoolybill (Critique Team)
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133 forum postsmrswoolybill vcard United Kingdom337 Constructive Critique Points
14 Feb 2008 - 11:02 PM
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Congratulations on the HC. ****** the bits in the background, this is a gem.
Moira

about time these got some recognition

Last Modified By MediumSizeUnavailable at 15 Feb 2008 - 2:01 AM
TommyStr
15 Feb 2008 - 4:12 AM
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That explains the 16 over-night clicks Smile Thank you Pete

Thanks everyone

Buffalo_Tom
Buffalo_Tom (e2 Member)
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2308 forum postsBuffalo_Tom vcard Wales9 Constructive Critique Points
15 Feb 2008 - 7:01 AM
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Fabulous candid image and love the light.
Tom.

Oh, ha ha! Koen goes all soft, I go a bit hard and Pete agrees with Koen. Well Pete seems sure enough of it for an HC, even if we were both a little unsure!
Many congrats. Smile

funkeldink
15 Feb 2008 - 10:51 AM
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oh yessss..... quality

LesF
LesF (e2 Member)
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159 forum postsLesF vcard 8 Constructive Critique Points
15 Feb 2008 - 12:17 PM
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Super candid

Les F

Geraint
15 Feb 2008 - 1:45 PM
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Outstanding.
Geraint

bliba
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Austria2 Constructive Critique Points
15 Feb 2008 - 3:50 PM
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real life...wonderful....congrats on the well deserved HC

those light bits are a bit of a worry but as a whole a very pleasant photo with good dof.
Congrats on a well deserved HC

Eviscera
Eviscera (e2 Member)
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1082 forum postsEviscera vcard United Kingdom146 Constructive Critique Points
15 Feb 2008 - 7:01 PM
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has a lovely reportage feel , he is so engrossed !

dave

User_Removed
17 Feb 2008 - 10:12 AM
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well done on the HC, love all the detail and the emerging face in the background

di

essence of travel photography. Sometimes, normality is so beautiful. The earring is great. Bert

lonely_oryx
lonely_oryx (e2 Member)
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18 Feb 2008 - 2:21 PM
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Fantastic shot

riprap007
27 Oct 2009 - 3:44 PM
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this has long been one of my fave images of yours, and yet I've only just realised I have never commented on it... so, belatedly, I'll say these few words and stack back in awe

Smile

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