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Hi all, a mono portrait with a bit of grain added, thanks for looking.
cheers phil.

Brand:PENTAX Corporation
Camera:Pentax K10D
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:30 Jan 2013 - 8:46 PM
Focal Length:40mm
Aperture:f/11.0
Shutter Speed:1/180sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:200
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Center-weighted average
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Manual
Title:portrait in mono
Username:mex mex
Uploaded:2 Feb 2013 - 12:46 PM
Tags:Digitally manipulated, Flash / lighting, General, Portraits / people
Votes:27
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Daisymaye
Daisymaye (e2 Member)
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Daisymaye vcard Canada7 Constructive Critique Points
2 Feb 2013 - 12:58 PM
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A lovely portrait and a very pretty bra. Like the pearls too..........Sandy

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devlin
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651 forum posts India39 Constructive Critique Points
2 Feb 2013 - 2:14 PM
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quite emotive Smile

achieverswales
achieverswales (e2 Member)
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achieverswales vcard Wales84 Constructive Critique Points
2 Feb 2013 - 2:37 PM
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Hi Phil
First off these are my opinions and others will disagree, the model is looking as if she is not happy at all, the necklace is untidy and the pose I do not find flattering, sorry but I do not like this one.

Regards

Trev.

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barbarahirst
barbarahirst (e2 Member)
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barbarahirst vcard United Kingdom9 Constructive Critique Points
2 Feb 2013 - 6:45 PM
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Gosh!!!
Fabulous capture
Everything Trev says makes me love this image all the more
Dynamic image springs to mind .....
In my opinion one of your best...
I am just back from london after seeing so many exhibitions .... and this is tops.

banehawi
banehawi (Critique Team)
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523 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2132 Constructive Critique Points
2 Feb 2013 - 8:32 PM
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Not one of your better images Phil.


I dont mind the look, - its sort of a harsh headmistress expression. What I can see when downloaded is that its composed only of shades of grey, with an absence of both black and white. Assuming you have Photoshop, look at levels, - the histogram is bunched in midtones. Drag the slider at both ends inwards to meet the graph for a very different image.

The top half is less exposed that the bottom half, which could be evened out, and its very soft, - needs sharpening. When you cropped, you left a small white line at the bottom. Cant see it here because its a small grey line!

I have a mod if you want to see it, just send me a PM. I think this is associated with the method you used for mono conversion.

Apologies to those who think otherwise, but this is honestly not a good shot. If you intended this to look as is, lets know, of if you were after a particular look that just didnt turn out, lets know too.



Regards


Willie

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mex
mex (e2 Member)
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mex vcard United Kingdom3 Constructive Critique Points
3 Feb 2013 - 3:05 PM
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Hi all, i have put a V2 up fof silly sunday, like to thank willie for his constructive critique and trev for his opinion, and the lovely barb for he U/A
Ps not very good at manipin faces in photoshop.
cheers phil GrinGrinGrinSmileSmileSmileSmileSmile

A Booth
A Booth (e2 Member)
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A Booth vcard United Kingdom3 Constructive Critique Points
4 Feb 2013 - 3:41 PM
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classic style, superbly lit and nicely recorded.

Richsr
Richsr (e2 Member)
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88 forum postsRichsr vcard England177 Constructive Critique Points
4 Feb 2013 - 4:31 PM
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The look doesn't bother me either Phil, but good feed back from Willie
Regards Richard

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