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Second attempt of the Campbell family

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Tidy up the background as advised.
Awaiting your judgement.
Be brutal! I can take it!

Camera:Fujifilm S2 Pro
Title:Second attempt of the Campbell family
Username:Michael Campbell Michael Campbell
Uploaded:18 Mar 2004 - 1:06 AM
Tags:Portraits / people
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greanise2000
18 Mar 2004 - 1:23 AM

great..much better without the backdrop...looks like a real professional studio shot now!
Lynn ...click

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noseprints
noseprints  10576 forum posts
18 Mar 2004 - 2:32 AM

nice job "tidying up". i noticed a little more detail in the faces in the other version. maybe more brightness and a tighter crop. slightly more effective, i find. love the setup. it's great to look at all the different expressions and guess what role they play in the family, and i'm not just talking mom, dad, etc...

very good creative composition. love the "uniforms".

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Bernie
Bernie  102201 forum posts
18 Mar 2004 - 8:11 AM

I missed the first shot, having now seen it I do prefer this one.
You have a great portfolio.

Bernie...

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Kim19
Kim19  1131 forum posts
18 Mar 2004 - 8:36 AM

Looks MUCH better without the background creases visible! Definiatly one for the wall!

Well done, great shot!

Kim

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Pete
Pete Site Moderator 1318446 forum postsPete vcard ePz Advertiser England96 Constructive Critique Points
18 Mar 2004 - 9:14 AM

Good job!

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Gary_Williams
18 Mar 2004 - 10:34 AM

Good job, you've a really nice family portrait here. Nice work.

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keithh
keithh e2 Member 1023041 forum postskeithh vcard Wallis and Futuna33 Constructive Critique Points
18 Mar 2004 - 12:09 PM

much better of the two, Michael. Too be critical, whatever process the shot has undergone, the tops of the heads of the three family members on the right seem to have a white haze to them. minor point, but I suspect it will be more visible on a large print.

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Michael Campbell
Michael Campbell e2 Member 11Michael Campbell vcard 3 Constructive Critique Points
18 Mar 2004 - 9:14 PM

Thanks for all your feedback. I will look at the brightness, cropping and the white haze
problem before printing out the picture.
"it's good to talk!"

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theorderingone
18 Mar 2004 - 11:00 PM

Much better

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