Hi Lalan, good effort, the imagination is there, which to some of us is one of the hardest parts of photography, though it could have worked allot better if you had paid more attention to the focus and exposure.
A tripod would have helped (if you didn't use one
and also more "depth of field" (DOF) I would have tried an aperture of around f8 or f11, and underexposed by about 1 to 2 stops to help prevent burning out the highlights.
Having said that, there are no hard or fast rules, just experiment, but trying to pay more attention to your focusing would help a lot.
Anyway good luck and welcome to EPZ.