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Sharpness....before you've finally closed the image go to "enhance" unsharp mask, then the settings need to be around...168 to 175 (amount) then somewhere between 3 and 5 (radius) and then 1 (threshold). That's assuming you're using PS. See if that works, it's the setting I usually use.
A nice subject with some fine detail in the tiny stamen. However the image would benefit from a much tighter crop. The leaves dominate the shot and distract the viewer form the flower. Maybe a tight crop leaving just the last two leaves would be more appealing. Also had you altered your viewpoint to allow us to see more detail of the flower head...whilst not straight on, at a slight angle for us to see a hint of the centre. When using a black background, I often have to use the selection tool to highlight all the background and then increase the saturation and decrease the light. This results in a much more solid background for you. Hope this helps a little?
I do quite a bit of work with water and long exposures so here are a few ideas and a little critique for this shot. (others may have different opinions or methods)
I've gotta agree with Alan...the levels and curves could do with altering to boost the contrast. Too many splash mark on the lens also distracts for me. I would also look at cropping or perhaps next time concentrating on composing to shot so that we are looking purely at the lower fall and the view through the hole...that way you would have eliminated the strong light from the top of the current shot. Hope this helps?
A lovely shot Hugh but if I may offer a bit of friendly cc....the light to the left is subtle and effective. with the use of reflectors and or white or silver card you could have balanced the light more evenly to show off the right element of the flower even better. I find that side a little too dark. I use a combination of natural daylight and reflectors or 150 watt halogen lamps (again with reflectors) or a "daylight" bulb which aims to replicate natural light as opposed to using ordinary bulbs which can give off a false warm light. A slight change of angle of the rose towards the lens would still give us the overall view that you have achieved but it would also give us more of a view of the interior.
Good use of the "prop" but if I may....it may have produced an even more favourable result had you propped the rose up more and perhaps at a slight angle to the lens so that we could see more detail in the centre. You can also see an element of light in the top right which could be eradicated by either cloning or using the wand tool to select the whole background and increase saturation to make it uniform black throughout. Just trying to help a little
Good movement in the water Jane however, I find that branch in the foreground a little distracting. I have been many a time and found a more favourable view to be from the bank you have shot from but I got right down near the first stone and got a view across the river (retaining movement with a long exposure) and looking up to a gate. I have also included the loo block which you have done here. I just feel this doesn't really do it justice. Only trying to offer a little constructive critique
Very nice indeed
Yes it's been done before...I alone must have uploaded 20 similar uploads. This for me is good but maybe you might have been better being lower down so that the foreground rock was more or less at lens level. That would have reduced the effective gap between the rocks and the middle distant reflection of the trees...that just seems a little too much space at the moment. A tweak to levels and curves may also give the shot a little more "punch" to it and this more impact.
The bloom itself is lovely, very photogenic. However the background cloth can still be seen...did you use flash? I also find the foliage distracts the eye from the main focus which should be the bloom. Have a look at your e-mail...I've sent you my take on this one and I would be interested to see what you think. Don't forget, this critique is intended to help your photography/processing skills...you already get plenty of "hits and votes"
A lovely rose well captured. I presume you have used flash on this one which shows all the detail well. However, it has also shown detail in the background. There are a couple of ways that I would avoid this....tripod mounted camera, position the flower in natural light and use a longer exposure without flash. The alternative is using this shot in PS select the background and alter the colour saturation to make the background solid and hence not show up the contours of the cloth. Hope you appreciate I'm only trying to help!
It has immediate impact...most shrooms that we see are excellent close-ups perfectly isolated from their backgrounds. Both versions give a great sense of scale and perspective which I guess is what you were after given your title. The ring-flash version definitely shows the shroom off in better light (oops). maybe a selective tweak to levels and curves may lift the colour slightly and give it even more oomph. Only my opinion and who am I to offer such advice. Only wish I could get down as low as is needed for a shot like this...sadly my recent op wont allow. Oh well maybe next autumn?!
I like this one Christine, natural pose of these lovely little creatures and despite bright sunshine; very well controlled exposure against the bright blue sky. You could always use the dodge tool on that eye...range would be highlights and exposure to around 8%. Alternatively create a duplicate layer and make a similar amendment and experiment with either highlights or shadows and alter the exposure, then you could alter the opacity of the layer. Hope this helps and I am by no means an expert on PS but I know I could make the above work. Someone may be able to offer an easier solution
Hi Baz
Classic isn't always the best option. I too have photographed the swirls at these, the lowest of all the falls. I usually shoot from the left hand side not from where you have shot. This is very effective and is helped by some super light. I've gotta add...a long exposure well controlled given that spot of light. It'll do well I'm sure
The composition looks good Ronnie. However...have you cloned some flowers out from the bottom of the shot? It appears quite messy and I can see greens and reds that look like you've tried to get rid of something. Sorry about the honesty but that's how we and I learnt when I first made similar mistakes