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This is my attempt at a digital make over with Portrait Professional. Over the top or about right? Feed back welcome on all aspects, lighting etc. Tech details Soft box Model's Right
Translucent brolly Model's left
Iso100
wb flash
F4@125th

Brand:Sony
Camera:Sony A700
Lens:minolta 135mm
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Red
Username:minicooper minicooper
Uploaded:18 May 2011 - 11:14 PM
Tags:Flash / lighting, Portraits / people
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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10819 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2820 Constructive Critique Points
19 May 2011 - 11:28 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Looks OK to me, - though its better if we had the original to compare to. I noticed a spot on her neck, - dont know if its a blemish that the person has, or something else, but it could be removed. Also cropped as suggested above, and made the background white in a mod.



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Willie

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paulbroad
paulbroad  781 forum posts United Kingdom845 Constructive Critique Points
20 May 2011 - 9:49 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Crikey, what eyes. i rather like this, but why not go the whole hog and move away from the conventional composition - come in REALLY tight on her face and eyes. And, if she doesn't mind, remove the spot on her chest.

Paul

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colinmac
colinmac  5 Ireland1 Constructive Critique Points
22 May 2011 - 1:20 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Yes, definately over the top. The whole picture has a red cast, look at the skin and white background. I see the idea you were trying to achieve but what I think may have gone wrong is that the hair area has not been selected properly and the red has bled into the rest of the picture giving the red cast.
Colin.

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