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This was actually the first picture I ever took on my DSLR! Was quite pleased at the timeSmile Please leave any comments Grin critique ?

Brand:NIKON CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D3100 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:18-55mm f/3.5-5.6 G
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:20 Sep 2011 - 10:13 AM
Focal Length:50mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/5.7
Aperture:f/5.6
Shutter Speed:1/4sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:3200
Exposure Mode:Not Defined
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:Fruit
Username:mohanramyaa mohanramyaa
Uploaded:27 Jan 2013 - 7:11 PM
Tags:Close-up / macro, Fruit
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KarenFB
KarenFB Junior Gallery Team 84271 forum postsKarenFB vcard England163 Constructive Critique Points
19 Jan 2013 - 3:42 PM

I love the colours, a lovely warm glow.

I think I would be tempted to crop off the left hand side (to remove the blue light), but that is just a personal opinion and probably just me! Smile

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mohanramyaa
19 Jan 2013 - 3:44 PM

Haha, thanks again Smile

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pluckyfilly
pluckyfilly e2 Member 8283 forum postspluckyfilly vcard United Kingdom33 Constructive Critique Points
27 Jan 2013 - 8:53 PM

Agree it has a nice glow and as a first picture one can't expect the work of a pro just a little too much out of focus for my liking ramyaa but don't be put off by my comment as your doing fine now and some of my first shots I was pleased with but looking back now realise they are not great, just keep going and enjoy - that's what it's all aboutWink

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jamestheboy
27 Jan 2013 - 10:24 PM

Like the colours in this one






james Smile

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cats_123
cats_123 e2 Member 104014 forum postscats_123 vcard Northern Ireland25 Constructive Critique Points
28 Jan 2013 - 9:02 AM

there's a little bit of distraction in the bg and although having the whole bowl in frame is nice, I wonder whether a crop on the left might help isolate the in focus fruit Smile

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mohanramyaa
28 Jan 2013 - 11:46 AM

thank you everyone Smile

Last Modified By mohanramyaa at 28 Jan 2013 - 11:47 AM

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pluckyfilly
pluckyfilly e2 Member 8283 forum postspluckyfilly vcard United Kingdom33 Constructive Critique Points
28 Jan 2013 - 3:28 PM


Quote: There's a little bit of distraction in the bg and although having the whole bowl in frame is nice, I wonder whether a crop on the left might help isolate the in focus fruit Smile

came back for a second look and agree with the quoted statement ramyaa, sometimes it needs a second look to appreciate the end productSmile

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mohanramyaa
28 Jan 2013 - 6:58 PM

ok thank you ann! Smile

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