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Having not read the other comments my critique would be .. the converging lines of the centre of the curved bars would look great in the centre in my opinion ... so to achieve this a lower perspective and a slight move to the right. Then making sure the distance from the top and the sides of the bars to the image edge is exactly the same all round to reinforce the uniformity .. I think this slight adjustment in viewpoint would tie in all the lines that would lead you to the image centre and strengthen the image slightly. Hope this is helpful critique. P.S. the mono is good .. is focuses your view on the pattern rather having an added distraction of colour.
Hi Joosie, in terms of wanted critique I would slightly rotate the image a degree or two clockwise because whilst it may be straight the waterline on the bank in the distance gives an ever so slight feeling of tilt .. and I would crop out the foliage at the bottom - leaving you with a cleaner more pano style shot and no distraction from the foliage that is there as a distraction but adds little. Nice scene .. I like how the outcrop on the mid left is highlighted by the sun.
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