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24/11/2009 - 9:05 AM

Sultry

SultryI love the angle could I suggest that you try this pose again with a little more light on the models head and face and less on the hip, alos if the left hand was, say, holding the hem of the blouse it wouldnt look so disproportionate.
All that said still a great shot
08/05/2009 - 2:15 PM

Gold

GoldThe lighting is almost spot on, the problem that I see is that the back of the hair is blown out, maybe turn the hair light down a tad . The rest of the shot is perfectly exposed and you have some great details on the "shadow side".
Also I have noticed a lens flair spot on the right handside, maybe try a lens hood.
I wish my lighting was this good and I hope this helps