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Another one from the photoshoot, I have another session today, and will hopefully be catching up a little more after that
MO

Camera:Canon EOS 350D
Lens:50mm
Recording media:ISO100
Title:Photoshoot
Username:MoWiz MoWiz
Uploaded:2 Apr 2006 - 1:04 AM
Tags:Portraits / people
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Chant57
Chant57 Plus Member 9391 forum postsChant57 vcard United Kingdom3 Constructive Critique Points
2 Apr 2006 - 1:08 AM

Good lighting, bringing out the hilights in her hair, good colour and detail. Great work.
C

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foxybrown
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2 Apr 2006 - 1:22 AM

good one mo, i would TDA

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chase
chase Critique Team 91118 forum postschase vcard England242 Constructive Critique Points
2 Apr 2006 - 1:32 AM

Nice composition on this one Mo,the light has brought out the nice skin tones & the lovely colours in her hair,well taken.
Janet

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Gray22
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2 Apr 2006 - 1:36 AM

Well well... Another lesson in professional photography from the master... Excellent as can only be expected my friend... Great work and have a wonderful weekend... Love to the family... 5 Smile

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C_Daniels
C_Daniels Plus Member 10399 forum postsC_Daniels vcard England10 Constructive Critique Points
2 Apr 2006 - 1:40 AM

Very nice Mo...

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tomcat
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2 Apr 2006 - 1:44 AM

Super image Mo
You have done her justice

Adrian

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arnieg
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2 Apr 2006 - 1:46 AM

great image
arnie

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tull
tull Plus Member 11181 forum poststull vcard United Kingdom
2 Apr 2006 - 1:54 AM

Fantastic work here Mo great light and skin tones,brilliant.

Mark.

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EJMaleevsky
EJMaleevsky Plus Member 1037 forum postsEJMaleevsky vcard Australia
2 Apr 2006 - 3:08 AM

First off great pose and expression. The skin tones are perfect, as is the exposure.

I'm sorry but I feel the lighting is a little flat, I think you could work on the placement of lights and lighting ratios

Here is a link on lighting ratios: http://www.vividlight.com/articles/1916.htm
Its not the best, but you'll get the idea.

Your "wooden boy" image is much better with the position of the light source.

I found a website on basic lighting styles: http://home.earthlink.net/~terryleedawson/id11.html
For this model / style of shot I'd go for butterfly lighting, for which you'd use a soft light above the model and slightly in front. See the website for more details. I've used it in some of my recent shots.

I hope you dont think I'm being rude, I just wanted to help.
Liz

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John_Horner
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2 Apr 2006 - 3:15 AM

All of the above and really great work on this portrait.

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thorn
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2 Apr 2006 - 3:37 AM

Hi Mo,I think the face of this lady is absolutely excellent and the way you have her dressed with the top and trouser,but i am not so sure about her stance,everything else looks good to me.Take care.AnnSmile

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tim g
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2 Apr 2006 - 5:19 AM

Very nice photo, well presented.

Tim

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VintageRed
VintageRed Plus Member 9VintageRed vcard United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
2 Apr 2006 - 5:28 AM

Hi Mo. The pose is a good one and shows attention to detail I think. I would have preferred to see both eyes but a good shot nonetheless. Nick.

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Retnyap
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2 Apr 2006 - 5:39 AM

Recognize that pout anywhere and again the strength of pose. A class portrait.
Davey P.

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sunshot
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2 Apr 2006 - 5:43 AM

very very nice shot, and a cracking pose, well done indeed.

marc

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lizziew
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2 Apr 2006 - 6:47 AM

great pose lovely light well captured mo...........liz

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ChristineL
2 Apr 2006 - 8:20 AM

Lovely lighting, great colours and pose,
Chris.

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Jasbe
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2 Apr 2006 - 8:31 AM

Great portrait shot Mo,
Jason

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hattrick
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2 Apr 2006 - 10:02 AM

Great composition, lighting and colour Mo. Super job

Geoff

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MalcolmS
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2 Apr 2006 - 10:04 AM

Looks great to me Mo, nice natural tones, beautiful hair,exposure spot on

Malcolm

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Toppix
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2 Apr 2006 - 10:26 AM

Lovely colours and great hair. Very natural looking and well lit. Have an RC on me.
Ian

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alexanderL
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2 Apr 2006 - 3:07 PM

wonderfull exposure great model nice pose
Click
Alex

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Desh_M
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2 Apr 2006 - 7:43 PM

Don't know much about portraits but this one looks superb
The lighting is well arranged.
Like it.

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Kim Walton
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2 Apr 2006 - 11:30 PM

Nice one Mo.

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bruce295
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3 Apr 2006 - 4:59 AM

Great shot as always Mo, like it a lot.

Geoff

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denka
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3 Apr 2006 - 8:09 AM

Hi Mo!
Im also sorry been real busy at school myself.
=)
Great one Mo this ones a real beauty. The comp, pose, eyecontact and the light is great. Real good work my friend and hope to see more model shoots from you soon.

denka

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PatrickSmith
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3 Apr 2006 - 8:41 AM

Wow Mo, you know how to me them look good!
Patrick

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Wooly
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3 Apr 2006 - 8:54 AM

Nice shot Mo.

Alan

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colin
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3 Apr 2006 - 9:18 AM

Love the pose and crop, Mo.
Lovely lighting and model.
Colin

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elcid
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3 Apr 2006 - 9:50 AM

Great shot, mate, lovely.

Bill.

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glenalva
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3 Apr 2006 - 11:12 PM

Super image, brilliant work.

Alison

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panda
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4 Apr 2006 - 7:31 AM

Hi Mo, love these last three portraits you have uploaded, super colours and lighting.

Regards Phil

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Marian
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4 Apr 2006 - 7:33 AM

Excellent.
Marian

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StevenPrice
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4 Apr 2006 - 10:38 AM

well done excellent shot Mo.

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KBan
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4 Apr 2006 - 11:54 AM

hi Mo excellent portrait, good pose, beats the lighthouse!!!
Keith

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tonymarq
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4 Apr 2006 - 2:49 PM

Mo stunning model and a perfect capture of her! I love her expression and pose which work well!

stay well
tonymarq

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jeffa
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5 Apr 2006 - 5:32 AM

Great work Mo - will catch up soon

Jeff

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TessC
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5 Apr 2006 - 8:01 AM

Lovely, a wonderful job. Like her pose and your off centre composition.

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VNelson
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5 Apr 2006 - 11:17 AM

A great shot, Mo. Can't imagine where to begin the learning curve on approaching this!

Verne

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Jaye
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6 Apr 2006 - 1:00 AM

Lovely portrait with great lighting...Judith

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Hawkgenes
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6 Apr 2006 - 7:18 AM

Lovely colour tones and lighting. Very well done Mo

Hawk

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8 Apr 2006 - 7:15 AM

Saucy!!

Dave

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Big_Beavis
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8 Apr 2006 - 12:55 PM

Like the composition and lighting in this one Mo.

David

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sputnki
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11 Apr 2006 - 7:28 AM

Another nice one of your model!

Doug

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mandarinkay
mandarinkay Plus Member 11mandarinkay vcard United Kingdom
13 Apr 2006 - 7:17 AM

Yes ... MY figure looks just like that too! LOL! In my dreams hahahaha! Lovely portraits Mo .... all of them superb detail light and clarity! Well done! Click*
Karen

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jan 1
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15 Apr 2006 - 4:12 AM

WOW.!
Superb.!
Jan

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