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Firstly I'd like to thank everyone who gave me invaluable feedback on the first version.
Took on board a lot of what was said and gave this one a little more thought.
Again I know it is not to everyones taste but I really appreciate the feedback, was quite impressed with the 250+views it got LOL
Mo

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Camera:Canon EOS 350D
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Recording media:ISO100
Title:Still Waiting
Username:MoWiz MoWiz
Uploaded:15 Jan 2006 - 8:08 AM
Tags:Flash / lighting
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JouŠo
JouŠo e2 Member 1056 forum postsJouŠo vcard Finland
15 Jan 2006 - 8:14 AM

NOW I knew it was YOU, Mo! LOL..........
...and it wasnt me viewing 250 times...LOL...

Another good one, Mo!

Jouko

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MoWiz
MoWiz  9114 forum posts United Kingdom
15 Jan 2006 - 8:15 AM

your secret is safe with me Jouko, LOL

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Jasbe
Jasbe  9116 forum posts England
15 Jan 2006 - 8:31 AM

Nice one Mo, not guilty either on the viewing.
Jason

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glazzaro
glazzaro e2 Member 970 forum postsglazzaro vcard United States23 Constructive Critique Points
15 Jan 2006 - 8:32 AM

Much better Mo, the re-work looks great, well done Sir! Spot on! Click!!!

Greg

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KBan
KBan  9468 forum posts England4 Constructive Critique Points
15 Jan 2006 - 8:42 AM

looks good Mo
keith

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exposure
exposure e2 Member 101761 forum postsexposure vcard England
15 Jan 2006 - 8:45 AM

A Brilliant portrait lovely composition and detail light and tones.
Pauline.

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MalcolmS
MalcolmS e2 Member 91107 forum postsMalcolmS vcard England13 Constructive Critique Points
15 Jan 2006 - 8:57 AM

So this is what you get up to in your spare time Mo. Nice one mate, mean moody and magnificent
Malcolm

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Coleslaw
Coleslaw e2 Member 913403 forum postsColeslaw vcard Wales28 Constructive Critique Points
15 Jan 2006 - 9:06 AM

lovely...Wink
You are no less evil than I am...Wink

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TonyA
TonyA  9 Spain
15 Jan 2006 - 9:09 AM

Good mood pose and lighting.

Antonio

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arnieg
arnieg  10682 forum posts England
15 Jan 2006 - 9:14 AM

works well again
arnie

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ValSaxby
ValSaxby e2 Member 9140 forum postsValSaxby vcard United Kingdom
15 Jan 2006 - 9:17 AM

Works really well, imho this is much better than the original. lovely work.
Val

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boot
boot  10 United Kingdom
15 Jan 2006 - 9:33 AM

Nice mood Mo like it..
Alan.

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Retnyap
Retnyap  928 forum posts
15 Jan 2006 - 9:36 AM

Yep, this is the one for me. Better alround shot pose, lighting and feel.
Davey P.

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Sina
Sina  8
15 Jan 2006 - 10:05 AM

Very nice picture.

Thank you for your tips, will use them on my next one.

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thorn
thorn  10124 forum posts Scotland2 Constructive Critique Points
15 Jan 2006 - 10:05 AM

Hi Mo,i like the lighting better in this one,it gives a softer look.Take care.AnnSmile

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jan 1
jan 1  10 Netherlands
15 Jan 2006 - 10:12 AM

Nice pictures they are, Mo.
see you in a week
Jan

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mic5cott
mic5cott  8
15 Jan 2006 - 10:18 AM

Thanks for putting up another shot of this exceptional model Mo, I'll hold my hands up and admit I viewed the first one several times, didn't think it was 250 times though, LOL .clik

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norton
norton  10 United Kingdom6 Constructive Critique Points
15 Jan 2006 - 10:26 AM

Great colour,lighting,and composition....Nice one Mo....

Tony.

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lizziew
lizziew  9
15 Jan 2006 - 10:43 AM

great pose very moody shot well captured........liz

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Pegon
Pegon  978 forum posts England1 Constructive Critique Points
15 Jan 2006 - 10:49 AM

Nice work Mo , the lighting is a lot better on this one .
Pete .

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nolongeramember
15 Jan 2006 - 11:08 AM

the oh la la la often gets the viewers.. hehehehe winks !!!!

it has an air of victorian erotica...love the outfit and setting... lovely mo...

NikkiSmile

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taggart
taggart e2 Member 1042 forum poststaggart vcard United States12 Constructive Critique Points
15 Jan 2006 - 11:08 AM

Yes, it does seem to be an improvement!

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mandarinkay
15 Jan 2006 - 11:14 AM

Have your your 30th on me Mo .... Congrats .... lighting is a little softer here ... and there is no burnout .... an imrovement over the previous upload! Click*
Karen

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mandarinkay
15 Jan 2006 - 11:15 AM

got beaten to it as I was typing ... haha .. sorry Mo!
Karen

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jacquienewsham
15 Jan 2006 - 11:20 AM

lovely light and tones,great image
samantha

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JouŠo
JouŠo e2 Member 1056 forum postsJouŠo vcard Finland
15 Jan 2006 - 11:21 AM

Mo: LOL...More, please... ; )

Jouko

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highlander
highlander  1032 forum posts Scotland
15 Jan 2006 - 12:50 PM

Oh its not fair Mo you get all the good jobs to photograph and all I get is the lochs and glens, LOL...Aye no bad for some...good work my friend and a fine colourful and pretty model to work with.
Doug.

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Portknockie
15 Jan 2006 - 11:50 PM

I liked the last up load and I like this as well..Smile

Great work..

DonSmile

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megamuff8
megamuff8  1092 forum posts United States
16 Jan 2006 - 12:36 AM

Like this softer version, Mo, but I Luv the higher contrast of the 1st shot....Both very nice!
Had to smile at some of the comments....Always fun!
Cheers,
Suzan Smile

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User_Removed
16 Jan 2006 - 12:52 AM

Hi Mo.
Now this is a brilliant shot of a great model , the whole scene works so well, colours, props and costume are wonderful Victor

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denka
denka  9 Finland
16 Jan 2006 - 2:36 AM

I think this is great! Working with an exceptional model. I like this one more than your first upload. The contrast is much better in this one. I love the seductive feel in it. The only thing that bothers me a little bit is the models tattoo on her shoulder. It draws a little attention away from the model I think. Good eyecontact by the way. Thnx for your comments Mo much appreciated. Keep up the fantastic work mate.

denka

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A Booth
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16 Jan 2006 - 3:52 AM

nice composition - effective use of tones on this glamourous person.

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mic5cott
mic5cott  8
16 Jan 2006 - 6:35 AM

Hi Mo, thanks for your comments. I see this is doing well, you've found a niche here. mike

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vparmar
vparmar  10 United Kingdom
16 Jan 2006 - 8:03 AM

this is much better Mo - contrast is much better - well done

vinny

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PatrickSmith
16 Jan 2006 - 8:17 AM

Yes, I just saw the last one, and this one is more evenly balanced. I'd also like to see a version halfway in between the two, where the bright spots are not too bright but where the darker areas still have more detail. LOL - And then once you've done that I'll ask for other changes just to keep the series alive!
Patrick

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hebdens
hebdens  9
16 Jan 2006 - 8:44 AM

great shot and set up,its good to try something different.well done !!!

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Rock
Rock e2 Member 12Rock vcard England2 Constructive Critique Points
16 Jan 2006 - 10:23 AM

And she likes her Beer,
And they call her, Chushy Butterfield ,
And I wish she was here !!!

Mo,
It is a alternative winner.
Rock

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ChristineL
16 Jan 2006 - 10:43 AM

She's certaimly a glam lady, the lighting on this is much better ( to my tastes) than the previous shot, nice one,
Chris.

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Hawkgenes
Hawkgenes  9 United Kingdom
16 Jan 2006 - 12:03 PM

A very impressive lady and a great picture

Hawk

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yjjeep
yjjeep  10
16 Jan 2006 - 3:20 PM

Looks great.

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Leo
Leo  1345 forum posts England9 Constructive Critique Points
16 Jan 2006 - 11:39 PM

Works well this one Mo..definitely the best of them...the body shape, right down to her feet looks smooth and all in line....I have to smile at the overall impression the image givesSmile
Well done mate...

Leo

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PhillsPhotography

nice pose and outfit
good exposure

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dalowsons
dalowsons  1089 forum posts Australia
24 Jan 2006 - 10:04 AM

I like the more even lighting on this one, but overall I think I prefer the first one. Both great though !

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davidbailie
davidbailie e2 Member 11451 forum postsdavidbailie vcard United Kingdom6 Constructive Critique Points
5 Feb 2006 - 6:50 AM

Great feel to this

Dave

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gajewski
gajewski e2 Member 10gajewski vcard United States9 Constructive Critique Points
2 Mar 2006 - 2:02 PM

I like this version very much. I didn't read the comments on the first version but I did notice that the highlights are a bit more controled on this one, preserving detail.
VERY nice shot. -=Walter

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