Login or Join Now

Upload your photos, chat, win prizes and much more

Username:
Password:
Remember Me

Can't Access your Account?

New to ePHOTOzine? Join ePHOTOzine for free!

We are such stuff as dreams are made on

mrswoolybill > Gallery > We are such stuff as dreams are made on

Versions (Variants)Version Help

Join Now

Join ePHOTOzine, the friendliest photography community.

Upload photos, chat with photographers, win prizes and much more for free!

Add Comment

The cloud-capp'd towers, the gorgeous palaces,
The solemn temples, the great globe itself,
Yea, all which it inherit, shall dissolve,
And, like this insubstantial pageant faded,
Leave not a rack behind. We are such stuff
As dreams are made on; and our little life
Is rounded with a sleep.

(The Tempest IV, i)

A final visit to Brompton Cemetery. V2 is the full frame before cropping. I rather like the blown leaves but realise that they might not be to everyone's taste.
Thanks for looking,
Moira

Brand:Nikon CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D40 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:Lensbaby Composer
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Date Taken:21 Apr 2012 - 2:05 PM
Focal Length:50mm, allegedly
Lens Max Aperture:f/2.0
Aperture:f/4.0
Shutter Speed:1/320sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:200
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Reading the entrails
Flash:No Flash
White Balance:As Shot
Title:We are such stuff as dreams are made on
Username:mrswoolybill mrswoolybill
Uploaded:23 Aug 2012 - 7:28 AM
Tags:Photo journalism, Specialist / abstract
Votes:50
Variant - TestsVariant - Tests

Comments

SUE118
SUE118 (e2 Member)
5
SUE118 vcard United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
23 Aug 2012 - 7:33 AM
0

I love walking around graveyards as there is so much to capture and these shots are lovely.Smile

Sponsored Links
Sponsored Links
23 Aug 2012 - 7:43 AM

Join ePHOTOzine for free and remove these adverts.

Ray42
Ray42 (e2 Member)
5
Ray42 vcard England3 Constructive Critique Points
23 Aug 2012 - 7:43 AM
0

Quite an apt quotation to go with this - I think the blown out leaves add something too - nice one Moira

RysiekJan
RysiekJan (e2 Member)
7
RysiekJan vcard United Kingdom
23 Aug 2012 - 7:47 AM
0

Prefer V1, but wonder if cropping V2 on the rhs would better suit the blown leaves element of the shot.
Either way two fine pics Moira.

Richard

NDODS
NDODS (e2 Member)
2
253 forum postsNDODS vcard United Kingdom33 Constructive Critique Points
23 Aug 2012 - 7:50 AM
0

Gorgeous and very thought evoking words Moira, and two equally as beautiful images. I am certainly swayed towards Version Number II, simply because it provides me with a more balanced image.

Regards Nathan

WhiteRose1
WhiteRose1 (e2 Member)
3
681 forum postsWhiteRose1 vcard England107 Constructive Critique Points
23 Aug 2012 - 7:54 AM
1

If we shadows have offended,
Think but this, and all is mended,
That you have but slumbered here
While these visions did appear.
And this weak and idle theme,
No more yielding but a dream...


v1 please, the leaves draw my eye too much. Death, shade, out of focus..... wonderful imagery.

Dave

AnnChown
AnnChown (e2 Member)
3
99 forum postsAnnChown vcard United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
23 Aug 2012 - 8:19 AM
0

v1 for me Moira - it's really beautiful and so cleverly seen and taken. Love it! Smile I agree with Dave about v2 - the blown leaves take my eye away from what matters.
Ann

Last Modified By AnnChown at 23 Aug 2012 - 8:20 AM
morpheus1955
morpheus1955 (e2 Member)
6
morpheus1955 vcard United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
23 Aug 2012 - 8:40 AM
0

Two excellent images Moira, for me it has to be V1

Hugh

Richsr
Richsr (e2 Member)
6
88 forum postsRichsr vcard England180 Constructive Critique Points
23 Aug 2012 - 9:03 AM
0

Version one for me good LB work Moria

franken
franken (e2 Member)
10
2393 forum postsfranken vcard Wales2 Constructive Critique Points
23 Aug 2012 - 9:06 AM
0

Version 1 for me Moira - wonderful work!

Ken

TrevBatWCC
TrevBatWCC (e2 Member)
4
TrevBatWCC vcard England5 Constructive Critique Points
23 Aug 2012 - 9:52 AM
0

A fine bit of work with the LB, Moira Smile Have to agree with above, that in V2, the bright parts take the eye away from what we should be looking at, so V1 for me too! Wink
Trev Smile

mikbee
mikbee (e2 Member)
6
mikbee vcard Scotland3 Constructive Critique Points
23 Aug 2012 - 10:51 AM
0

I too find the blown leaves a bit too distracting Moira,
and perhaps a bit more cropping on the right hand side for V1.
I visualise a square crop for V3 methinks !!
Mick.

KingBee
KingBee (e2 Member)
7
286 forum postsKingBee vcard Scotland2 Constructive Critique Points
23 Aug 2012 - 11:16 AM
0

V1 for me, too, for pretty much the reasons stated above. The ivy looks wonderfully delicate. However, I sometimes find Lensbaby shots hard on the eyes: I keep wanting to shut them and re-focus, only to find it hasn't made a blind (no pun intended) bit of difference. Bit like these T-shirts you see or signs behind the bar showing blurred words in order to mimic the effects of alcohol. I prefer to work on the effects in my own time, thank you very much. Wink

Regards.

Bob

Joline
Joline (e2 Member)
7
Joline vcard United States47 Constructive Critique Points
23 Aug 2012 - 12:43 PM
0

As fleeting as life itself.

BarryC123
BarryC123 (e2 Member)
4
43 forum postsBarryC123 vcard Ireland25 Constructive Critique Points
23 Aug 2012 - 1:20 PM
0

I think Mick's right (but don't tell him I said that)... a little bit more off the right on V1 would do nicely.
Splendidly taken image, the muted colours and lensbaby combine to give a really atmospheric graveyard image.

Scottishlandscapes
Scottishlandscapes (e2 Member)
8
67 forum postsScottishlandscapes vcard Scotland34 Constructive Critique Points
23 Aug 2012 - 2:25 PM
0

My Mother used to shiver occasionally and say "somebody just walked over my grave". I just got that feeling when I opened this image Moira, classic spooky daylight image, look over your shoulder quickly so that nobody notices.

Dougie

CarolG
CarolG (e2 Member)
6
108 forum postsCarolG vcard Greece12 Constructive Critique Points
23 Aug 2012 - 2:54 PM
0

V.1 for me, Moira, a fine composition and capture. Carol

Sezz
Sezz (e2 Member)
8
615 forum postsSezz vcard England15 Constructive Critique Points
23 Aug 2012 - 3:01 PM
0

V1 for me too Moira, you are so good at seeing these type of images, they make me think & use my imagination! The prose you chose is very apt!

Sarah *

RockArea
RockArea (e2 Member)
6
RockArea vcard United Kingdom3 Constructive Critique Points
23 Aug 2012 - 4:51 PM
0

Always nice to get a taster from the Bard. V1 for me, the transition from left to right (or maybe it's the other way) is superb.

David

mrswoolybill
mrswoolybill (Critique Team)
6
136 forum postsmrswoolybill vcard United Kingdom374 Constructive Critique Points
23 Aug 2012 - 4:59 PM
0

Thanks everyone, it's been a long day (GCSE results at the High School plus other community jobs), I'm back here to recover.

Quote: perhaps a bit more cropping on the right hand side for V1.
I visualise a square crop for V3 methinks !!


Quote: I think Mick's right (but don't tell him I said that)

Now, for once I am rejecting the idea of a square crop. This is because I'm very fond of the right hand cross and I don't want to lose any of it. Sorry, sometimes I can be stubborn. (Sometimes?)
Better check out what else has happened here today now.
Moira

Last Modified By mrswoolybill at 23 Aug 2012 - 4:59 PM
gajewski
gajewski (e2 Member)
8
gajewski vcard United States8 Constructive Critique Points
23 Aug 2012 - 5:03 PM
0

I love this image. The V1 crop is the better of the two.
-=W.

gajewski
gajewski (e2 Member)
8
gajewski vcard United States8 Constructive Critique Points
23 Aug 2012 - 5:06 PM
1

Ooops. I just now read the back and forth about maybe cropping more off of V1. I have to side with you on this one, Moira.
What attracted me (and prompted my comment) to this image initially was exactly the right hand cross. Even though it is oof, it has a dramatic impact.
-=\W.

lifesnapper
lifesnapper (e2 Member)
7
lifesnapper vcard England
23 Aug 2012 - 5:59 PM
0

Dreamy stuff indeed Moira. Shame it dosn't feel like a Mid Summers Night.

John Smile

danbrann
danbrann (e2 Member)
8
389 forum postsdanbrann vcard 15 Constructive Critique Points
23 Aug 2012 - 7:00 PM
0

For fear of upsetting you further I will not comment but have a tick anyway.

Glostopcat
Glostopcat (e2 Member)
7
196 forum postsGlostopcat vcard England1 Constructive Critique Points
23 Aug 2012 - 7:15 PM
0

V1 for me too Moira, you see things that most of us miss

mikbee
mikbee (e2 Member)
6
mikbee vcard Scotland3 Constructive Critique Points
23 Aug 2012 - 7:20 PM
2

Oh well,--it is not the first time my suggestions have been dismissed
out of hand by a stubborn woman !!
Mick.

RobinF
6
83 forum posts England1 Constructive Critique Points
24 Aug 2012 - 11:02 AM
0

V2 for me, I think the 'blown' leaves definitely add something and is a great reminder that we should all 'break the rules' more often. A great shot and a wonderful quote from 'the man' too. Mrs RobinF went to see an amateur production of Macbeth the other night. when I asked "how was it?" she simply said "it reminded me of Blackadder." I didn't ask for any more details after that!Sad
kind regards,
Robin

pascalg
pascalg (e2 Member)
5
37 forum postspascalg vcard France
2 Sep 2012 - 3:30 AM
0

superb text too...

- Original Poster Comments
- Your Posts

Add a Comment

You must be a member to leave a comment

Username:
Password:
Remember me:
Un-tick this box if you want to login each time you visit.