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Hopefully all of the leaves will not distract from the main focus, I didnt wish to remove them as I think it adds to the dereliction of the line.

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 550D
Lens:EF50 mm f/1.8
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:27 Nov 2011 - 11:36 AM
Focal Length:50mm
Aperture:f/5.6
Shutter Speed:1/40sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:800
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:End of the line.
Username:Jazzyjack Jazzyjack
Uploaded:15 Dec 2011 - 10:18 PM
Tags:Close-up / macro, General
Votes:Voting Disabled
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rambler
rambler e2 Member 6477 forum postsrambler vcard England14 Constructive Critique Points
15 Dec 2011 - 10:20 PM

Well seen and well titled.

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Jestertheclown
16 Dec 2011 - 11:19 AM

I rather like this.
I have however, cropped it and cooled the colours slightly.
Please see my mod.
Just a thought.
Bren.

Last Modified By Jestertheclown at 16 Dec 2011 - 11:19 AM

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SueEley
SueEley  8271 forum posts Wales96 Constructive Critique Points
16 Dec 2011 - 6:18 PM

I do like this. I didn't realise what it was but my husband looked over my shoulder and said, 'Is that a railway? Did they cut it off?' Intriguing. I think by converting to mono, you can have your cake and eat it too..... the plants are still there, but the tones are harmonious. I did a low contrast mono mod, but, of course, that's just my take on it. Any number of other ways to go, probably (high contrast mono, for example!)

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pamelajean Critique Team 8829 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1638 Constructive Critique Points
16 Dec 2011 - 10:02 PM

Good placement of the line, Lee. I like the modification with the bright top cropped, but also agree that mono is a good way to go with this. It's different, interesting and well captured.
Pamela.

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paulbroad
paulbroad  789 forum posts United Kingdom880 Constructive Critique Points
17 Dec 2011 - 4:02 PM

I really do like the idea and composition, but the background is far too bright and pulls the eye badly. Expose for the background and lighten the shadows later, or try balancing a correctly exposed background with a flash lit foreground.

paul

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