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04/12/2008 - 10:47 PM
I think that you have put composition first here, and in that respect its perfect with the jetty and the tree's etc, the dark area on the right is obviously because there was no reflected light in the sky above it, to me though its not such a big deal because the light elsewhere is fantastic enough to just pull it all through. Although it has been said a slight move forward would have given less of the dark area, however i think you would have struggled to get the tree's in so maybe going closer in and switching to vertical would have been another option.
21/05/2008 - 2:20 PM
I like the way you have included the moon and the foreground rocks seem to face towards it, however the moon is too high up in the corner, best to get the moon when it is lower in the sky (easier to include a foreground then without trying to squeeze everything in) and preferably with a longer lens to make it bigger, its pretty good though considering you used a wide angle lens.
15/05/2008 - 1:02 PM