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Sorry! but more of my beach photos.I had some advise on here with my last photo to crop it,so I have been experimenting on this one,what do you think,please let me know.It is not the same photo.

Brand:Panasonic
Camera:Panasonic Lumix DMC-TZ6
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:15 Apr 2012 - 1:06 PM
Focal Length:22.5mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/3.3
Aperture:f/5.6
Shutter Speed:1/500sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:80
Exposure Mode:Landscape
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Auto, Did not fire
Title:Bring me Back
Username:netta1234 netta1234
Uploaded:23 Apr 2012 - 6:38 AM
Tags:Landscape / travel, Transport
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Irishkate
Irishkate e2 Member 3Irishkate vcard United Kingdom73 Constructive Critique Points
23 Apr 2012 - 11:11 AM

Much better without a lot of sand in f/g.Nice tractor.
Good sky detail too.
An overall good shot Netta.
Remember you don't have to have subject right in centre.
On thirds is good.
Kate
Grin

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achieverswales
23 Apr 2012 - 3:12 PM

Good advice from Kate, nice one Netta.

Regards

Trev.

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UrbaneMagick
23 Apr 2012 - 4:36 PM

Nice colours in this...where's the beach Netta.

Gareth

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NDODS
NDODS e2 Member 32903 forum postsNDODS vcard United Kingdom99 Constructive Critique Points
23 Apr 2012 - 5:21 PM

A greta composition, love the colours of the vehicles in the foreground.

Regards Nathan

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carper123
carper123 e2 Member 279 forum postscarper123 vcard United Kingdom6 Constructive Critique Points
23 Apr 2012 - 5:40 PM

Lots going on, a smashing image, exposure is really good, luv the tractor.
well done Netta.
darryl.

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pamelajean
pamelajean Critique Team 8752 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1578 Constructive Critique Points
25 Apr 2012 - 1:31 PM

There is so much potential in this image, using the vehicle as your point of interest.
Kate makes a good point, Netta. In fact, avoid placing your subject in the centre whenever possible. For instance, anything that has the potential to move, be it a vehicle, insect, person, animal, etc., needs space in front of it, for it to move into, and less space behind it. Try not to get anything moving OUT of the frame, but INTO it. Your tractor therefore needs less space on the right, behind it.
This is where the rule of thirds often works for a composition such as this, and makes it far more viewable. Move out of the snapshot idea, Netta, and move towards the challenging world of making images aesthetically pleasing to the eye.
Also, you need a bit more space below the tractor because it's too close to the bottom frame. Look at your viewfinder or screen, compose accordingly, then shoot, and shoot again. Alter your viewpoint, move around, crouch down, until all elements come together nicely. Envisage this in portrait/vetical mode, for instance, with more space below the tractor and boat, placing it in the bottom right third, with a layered effect behind it of sky, cliffs, houses, sea and shore.
Pamela.

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