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dont know whether or not this should have been slightly off center or perhaps taken from a different viewpoint.

Title:High and dry
Username:Nick_G Nick_G
Uploaded:31 Oct 2010 - 7:53 PM
Tags:Boats, General, Harbour
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NickParry
NickParry  81016 forum posts Wales79 Constructive Critique Points
1 Nov 2010 - 11:12 AM

Although I am not a 'rules' person, I would be inclined to use the rule of thirds with a subject matter like this.

My mod shows what composition I think would work. I would also be inclined to shoot at a lower viewpoint and a wider lens.

Nick Smile

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pamelajean
pamelajean Critique Team 8752 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1578 Constructive Critique Points
1 Nov 2010 - 5:19 PM

Hello, Nick. I agree with the other Nick. I think the boats needed separating because they are the same colours and have the same buoys, so my first thought was that they blend together far too much. Shooting from the left of them, you could probably achieve the suggested composition and could also use the mooring chains as a lead-in. I'd like to have seen the top of the background boat inside the frame, and I agree with Frank about the removal of the mast cover. With a little more water on the sand, you might be able to include some good reflections, too.
Pamela.

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Nick_G
Nick_G e2 Member 5Nick_G vcard England
1 Nov 2010 - 8:06 PM

Many thanks all for your comments, which are very much appreciated.

Nick

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