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Personal Baggage...Part of the Death of a Salesman series

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I uploaded a version of this some time ago, but I wasn't happy, so there has been some considerable work to it - more contrast, extra "baggage" added

Recording media:RAW (digital)
Flash:Unknown (0x43b1)
Title:Personal Baggage...Part of the Death of a Salesman series
Username:Nick_w Nick_w
Uploaded:21 Sep 2012 - 3:07 PM
Tags:Black & white, Digitally manipulated, Flash / lighting, General, Portraits / people, Specialist / abstract, Transport
Votes:20

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DanielaS
DanielaS e2 Member 2DanielaS vcard Romania3 Constructive Critique Points
21 Sep 2012 - 3:27 PM

This is a really good composition! I love the vignette effect and the B&W gives a better meaning! Great job!

Daniela

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mrswoolybill
mrswoolybill Critique Team 8529 forum postsmrswoolybill vcard United Kingdom1094 Constructive Critique Points
21 Sep 2012 - 4:49 PM

Nice - fewer distractions this time.
Moira

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Eviscera
Eviscera e2 Member 81105 forum postsEviscera vcard United Kingdom149 Constructive Critique Points
21 Sep 2012 - 7:09 PM

Thats good Nick !

Maybe for a deeper conceptual you could have used an open door on the suitcase for a peek inside the salesman world.

The figure in the window travels well.

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