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07/04/2013 - 5:13 PM

midnight shower

midnight showerCracking shot !!!.......great idea & beautifully created !!!!

It just looks a little 'flat'.......so I've done a simple mod. to add a bit of 'zing' to the image, by
adjusting the levels & saturation....................
12/02/2013 - 8:00 PM

Three oranges

Three orangesCracking shot Ann !!.....lovely arrangement, with a great base/background, to add a bit of 'character' !!!

The b/g looks a tiny bit 'flat' ?....so I've done a mod. to add a bit of 'depth/form' to the flaky paintwork....& also
darkened the 'base' to alter it's 'angle' to the b/g wall.....plus changed it's colour tone a bit !
I've also added a bit of gaussian blur to the back wall to make it recede a bit, try & create some 'depth of field'.......

Not 100%, but just a quick mod. to see what could be brought out of the shot !!....again not a criticism, but just me
having a quick firkle !!!!!!!.Smile
03/02/2013 - 6:03 PM

Take three oranges

Take three orangesOoooo....you temptress you !!!.Grin....you knew I can't resist a challenge with a mod !

Lovely shot, nicely set up, & well lit !!!.......my only thought is looks to be 'floating' in
mid-air ?........rather than sitting on a base ??

In my mod. I've added a sort of 'base', & emphasized the shadows & hi-lites to add some
solidity & roundness......plus a hint of vignette !!

A distorted base texture (to make it look flat) might be better though ??

A fine shot all the same !!!!!!!!!.Smile
02/01/2013 - 5:02 PM

Still life

Still lifeCracking shot !!!....great subject, with a nice arrangement, & the textures have added to the character & feel of
the whole image........lovely piece of work, with a lovely painterly quality !!!!.Smile

When you add a textured layer it sometimes 'flattens' the tones a little, depending on the blending-mode....so I've
done a mod. to bring back some of the contrast & 'roundness' to the fruit.....plus a bit more colour in the seeds, &
finished with a vignette.........not a criticism, just adding a final 'flourish' to a great shot !!

....& Happy Birthday Ann.........
22/09/2012 - 7:21 PM

Dungeness sunset

Dungeness sunsetGreat shot !!!.....good subject matter, with a nice sky.............

With that 10-22 lens you could've knelt down & filled the F/G with that old 'rail-line' & still retained all the sky drama......which would've reduced
the pebbly area between the rails & the middle-ground.....& perhaps added a bit more 'depth' & 'oomph' ???????.........just a thought ......Smile
21/08/2012 - 7:44 PM

Big Hill

Big HillGreat shot !!!....good strong composition, with nice F/G, & rich colours !!!

Two thoughts...a) the F/G wall is pin-sharp, but the B/g hills are a bit 'soft'.....your aperture needs to be down at f11 or f16 to get everything sharp...& try & focus (in this shot) on the fence
for maximum DoF & sharpness..............unless your intention was to keep the wall sharp & soft hills, then I'll shut-up !!.Grin

b) that LH fence would make for a very strong lead-in to the image....so perhaps a couple of paces to the left would have made the fence more prominent ??....though it's
difficult to be sure without seeing what obstacles were there ??

A darned good effort though....& one to be proud of !!!!!!!.Grin
13/08/2012 - 3:54 PM

THE TWO OF US . . .

THE  TWO  OF  US . . .Beautiful shot !!.....but for me the border is competing with the colours in the main image, & detracts from the overall effect !!...perhaps desaturating the border might help ??... or
just use a neutral light-grey ???......other than that it's a corker !!!!!
21/06/2012 - 7:59 PM

Sunset Silhouette & Shadows

Sunset Silhouette & ShadowsGreat shot !!!....love the abstract/graphic quality in this beauty !!!

Though I think if it were mine, I'd crop 25% off the RH side, to balance the image a bit, & to
eliminate that very bright f/g 'splodge'........Smile
12/03/2012 - 4:03 PM

3 blue bottles

3 blue bottlesBeautiful shot !!!....love the blue/yellow colour-contrast, & arrangement !!!

Just a thought....I'd like to see more of the shadows of the bottles, so by tilting the camera down a smidgen
it would have achieved that, & reduced the upper part of the image which isn't contributing as much.....so apart
from that it's a corker !!
08/02/2012 - 2:32 PM

Ducks in the Mist

Ducks in the MistA beautiful shot !!.....lovely arrangement & great atmospherics !!!

The only minor point for me......I think the area of water is overwhelming the image a wee bit ??....maybe a slightly lower viewpoint would have overcome that ?....so....
I've done a simple mod to reduce the water area, by raising the bottom edge of the image, without cropping it, so it retains all the elements.....& enlarged the ducks a
bit, to make them more prominent ! Finally adjusted the 'Levels' a tiny bit, & added a thin black border to hold everything together..................

Not meant as a criticism, just my idea on what this lovely shot could end up like !!!.....regards....Keith.Smile
28/01/2012 - 4:46 PM

solitude ( If only)

solitude ( If only)Great shot !!!!.....good location....just needs the tonal range adjusting, to reduce the contrast, & perhaps
make it look a bit more 'gloomy' ?????....which should add to the 'loneliness', & overall mood !
07/01/2012 - 3:17 PM

A study in Yellow

A study in YellowI'll stick with V1 !!............

V2 has become a pure 'pattern' picture, still OK with nice curves & colour, but it's lost the 'zing' that exists in V1 ?????

Different strokes for different blokes, I think the expression is ??
03/12/2011 - 4:24 PM

Cley

CleyBeautiful shot !!!!.....the sepia toning suits the subject very well, though the contrast is a tiny bit flat ?, & the windmill should be facing 'into' the picture ?

I've done a mod. to illustrate my points, plus a few other changes, if you can spot them....see what you think ????

Regards...Keith.
18/11/2011 - 3:55 PM

Slater Bridge

Slater BridgeYeerrrrss !!!....V2 looks spot on !!!.......the 'heavier' tones have both created a nice 'base' to the shot, & balanced the whole
image.....as well as adding a bit more 'oomph' !!!!

Another way would be to create a new 'empty' Layer, then add a black grad to it from the bottom fading to zero at the bridge,
then set the blend-mode to 'Soft Light', & reduce the opacity to about 25%, & adjust from there...should have a very similar effect
to V2, but just another way of achieving it !!!!!

All good fun innit !!!!!!!

Keith.
16/11/2011 - 4:15 PM

Biccies 2

Biccies 2It's definitely getting there !.....set-up's OK, but all the highlights are too burned out......maybe 2 stops less exposure will give a better
starting image for details & shadows (preferably in RAW mode).....then adjust from there...........??

I tried a mod., but the highlights are lost, & couldn't improve them !

That 'bite' out the one biccy works very well too !!!!

Next...................
15/11/2011 - 4:35 PM

morning dew on web

morning dew on webLove it !!!!.....apart from the obvious 'sparkle', there's a touch of magic in there.....because you can't see the filaments of
the web, the dew-drops look to be 'levitating' ?, almost like a planetry system being created ??.....fascinating & beautiful !!!!!!!
12/11/2011 - 5:05 PM

My lovely daughter..........

My lovely daughter..........Stunning portrait, of a stunning girl !!!!......great 'pose', & beautifully photographed.....I think the very slight 'softness' in V1 only adds to her 'femininity'....love it !

I've done a fairly simple mod. for your consideration.........just added a 'glow' to the whole image !!....it's diffused the B/G a bit more, but more importantly it's
added even more 'femininity' (not that she needs it !), & created a nice 'aura' to the whole shot !......finally added a thin black border to hold everything together !!

Hope you like it ??.....regards....Keith.
31/10/2011 - 3:30 PM

Emotional storm

Emotional stormWow !....powerful stuff !!!!......I'd like to see it a teensy bit lighter in the lower 1/2 of the shot, to bring out those hilights in
the waves & foam ???

Hope you didn't get wet !...looks like that wave is coming your way !.Grin
08/10/2011 - 4:58 PM

Loch Assynt and Canisp II

Loch Assynt and Canisp IIA beautiful shot !!!!.....that softish side-lighting is sublime !!!

I can see a second shot in this ?.....if the L & R sides were cropped to just outside of the small island !....I reckon it'd be a really strong image !!!!...hold a couple of cards over the
screen image to see the effect ?????......adds some 'oomph', without any 'photoshopping' !!!!
27/09/2011 - 3:12 PM

Beth

BethHi Dilys......don't crop anything off the bottom, you'll lose some of the arm/hand !......a crop from the LH side just left of that sprig of Oak leaves
that she is holding, will give the 'classic' format ratio of 4 x 3......hope that helps ?
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